(02) Could Be This Way

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Song Lyrics  |  House: Booksie Classic

From "Before The Lights... The Drakness" [2000]
Street Date: 09/18/2000


Submitted: September 20, 2009

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sparkle12345

Wow, really liked this one!

Mon, September 21st, 2009 5:40pm

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Thanks for the commentary :]

Mon, September 21st, 2009 12:03pm

daeskimoindx

I liked it too, great work!

Tue, September 22nd, 2009 10:42am

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Thanks for the comment :]

Wed, September 23rd, 2009 9:33am

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Nice! I liked it so much, I knew I felt everything the moment I read it and well, very nice!

Tue, September 22nd, 2009 10:57pm

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Oh thanks! Read your comment really makes my day a lot better.

Fri, September 25th, 2009 10:01pm

Charles Pennyfeather

I liked it!

Sun, September 27th, 2009 10:01pm

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Thanks for the comment! :]

Sun, September 27th, 2009 7:45pm

Froodle

This is nicely written, save the spelling and grammatical errors. I love the emotion and intentions behind this piece. The voice you project is quite strong and devoted. Once again, nicely done man =]

Mon, September 28th, 2009 1:38am

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Thank you so much!!! I love this song because it remmembers me back in the day when I killed all the "to" in my sentences... lol And also because this song has so much meanings, it's a hard situation when you you're in a relationship and you don't know if that is real or if the other part is just playing with you... :]

Mon, September 28th, 2009 9:39am

txangel

i liked it hon.. you capture someone with your words..

Mon, September 28th, 2009 3:19am

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Thanks for the lovely comment :]

Mon, September 28th, 2009 9:39am

Niau

sooo let me see, there is a few gramma mistakes but they arent important. It's good, i think it would be good with music next to it. And then again as i said before if it is song lyrics there is a tab for it. Else it's good :]

Mon, September 28th, 2009 5:06am

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Thanks for the comment. And thanks for the tip, I remember when I posted this lyrics I looked for the "Song Lyrics" tab and I didn't find and I thought: "Oh... and now?"...lol :]

Sat, October 3rd, 2009 10:31am

Richa Gupta

very goog i liked it..keep going

Mon, September 28th, 2009 5:15am

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Thank you for the support! :]

Sat, October 3rd, 2009 10:52am

Mistress of Word Play

Felipe,
I really enjoyed this as much as the other things you have done. True the spelling needs a little work, but the emotions, rhythm and perfect form are here.
A truly amazing song.
Wish you had music set to it.
Thanks for reading on my site.
Your friend
Susan

Mon, September 28th, 2009 11:23pm

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Oh thanks for the lovely words my dear friend. Your comments are always very much appreciated. I promise when I record this songs you'll be one of the first to know it and to hear it. :]

Sat, October 3rd, 2009 11:11am

A7XRica

A really nice one, I like it!

Tue, September 29th, 2009 4:26am

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Thanks for the comment! :]

Sat, October 3rd, 2009 11:12am

Tiekoo

This one is really good too! Are you making a CD?
If so I would like to buy one! your really good.

Wed, September 30th, 2009 4:29pm

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Thanks again for you comment. No, I'm not making a CD, I don't know if I have the skills that a person needs to sing...lol But once I record this songs I'll post here for you guys listen. :]

Sat, October 3rd, 2009 3:16pm

Robert Wright

So there are some english mistakes. Portuguese is likely your mother tongue?

Still I am picking up the 'mad' feelings you are throwing down. Feeling always translates. I get it.

Keep throwing it down, Felipe. Muito Obrigado. I hear you loud and clear. It is a fine song. Valeu gratissimo.
//r.w.

Thu, October 1st, 2009 6:20am

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Thanks for the comment Robert and yeah, my mother tongue is portuguese. Do you speak it too? I'm very impressed with it.
Obrigado pelo seu comentário e espero vê-lo mais vezes por aqui.
Um abraço :]

Sat, October 3rd, 2009 3:18pm

Death Holy

OOOOO, I liked this a lot. It was really good. I love how you expressed yourself in the song about how much you loved this woman, and what you would do. It was really nice to read this one. Keep it up dude! I'm rooting for you.

Sun, October 4th, 2009 1:10am

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Thanks for the supporting Death. Read this comment meant a lot for me. I hope I can always count with your feedbacks. :]

Sun, October 4th, 2009 6:18pm

kitty98

this one sounds like something I would listen to more. Before I forget what type of music would go with the lyrics?

Sun, October 4th, 2009 1:51am

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Thank you. This is almost an upbeat song. But there is a friend of mine who made a total diferent "version" for this song. His version was really cool, a lil' bit heavy and hardcore but it was a awesome re-interpretaion of my work :]

Sun, October 4th, 2009 7:53pm

Jane Iwenofu

I dont wanna be "mislead"
Nice poem and a solid effort by you. I like it

Sun, October 4th, 2009 4:41am

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Thanks for the help and for the feedback. They both were very appreciated. :]

Sun, October 4th, 2009 6:20pm

Fyregx

Brillaint poem i absoutly loved it (:
Keep writing- you have a talent ^^

Sun, October 4th, 2009 12:52pm

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Thank you for the supporting! :]

Mon, October 5th, 2009 10:00am

Shade334

I'm not the biggest fan of poetry but this is pretty good.

Sun, October 4th, 2009 9:51pm

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Thank you very much. :]

Mon, October 5th, 2009 10:12am

Broadway Fairy

This is good! Do you have a melody for it? I wish we could hear it, but that's probably impossible! lol anyway, nice work!:D

Mon, October 5th, 2009 7:44pm

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Thanks for the comment. I don't have the melody recorded yet, but as soon as I have I'll post here for you guys listen. :]

Mon, October 26th, 2009 9:05pm

Robert Wright

No Felipe, I do not speak Portuguese, certainly not as well as you speak English.

But I visited Portugal in 1998, back in my Navy years. I made it a point, before I arrived in Lisbon, to learn to say hello, please, and thank you in the local language.

I was treated very well by everyone I met. And I would love to visit Brazil one day, but I am not sure if I would ever return home. //r.w.

Tue, October 6th, 2009 3:27am

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I think you probably like here, we have a lot of natural beauties arounde here...lol If one day you decide to come here let me know, I'd be glad to show you a "must-know" places here. :]

Tue, October 27th, 2009 7:18am

walkingonfate

*sighs*. You really get the whole odd relationship thing. The confused times. The down times. The bummer times and the good times. Really nice. x

Wed, October 7th, 2009 5:52pm

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Yeah, this song I was like when you want scream asking to someone taking a stand. If you want to stay, good. If you want to leave, it's ok, but let's do this in the propper way.

I'm glad that you like this one too. Thanks for the lovely comment. :]

Sun, October 11th, 2009 11:49pm

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