(03) Really Sometimes... Good Times Come Back

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From "Before The Lights... The Drakness" [2000]
Street Date: 03/19/2000


Submitted: September 21, 2009

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SLJONES

wow this was realy good sj

Tue, September 22nd, 2009 11:00am

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Thanks for the kind words... I'm glad that you liked it. :]

Wed, September 23rd, 2009 9:34am

Mistress of Word Play

Another lovely song. I hope when you have the musical score available you will upload some of it so we can hear it?
I still like to read it and make up the melody as I go.
Thank you for another lovely song.

Wed, September 23rd, 2009 3:36am

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Oh thanks so much, Mistress. I love your comments, they sure cheers my day. I still don't have the melody done for the lyrics, but when I compose it I'll post here so you can tell me what do you think about it. Now I just need to learn some musical skills to do that...lol
Kisses :]

Sun, September 27th, 2009 9:56am

Anson Brehmer

hmm. I suppose I'd have to hear the song in context to make much out of this. The lyrics don't do much to move me without having a tune to put them to. Then again, I'm the kind of person who listens to more dark and depressing lyrics than these are. The words seem to work well together, except for the line "accept to play my game," which really doesn't make a lot of sense to me. I think that's the one line that needs some work.

Sun, September 27th, 2009 1:54am

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Oh thanks for the comment. Yeah this is a "have some fun song", it's very different from the other songs in the "Before The Lights... The Darkness" book. This was a very dark phase of mine, I had a lot of depressing songs that I believe you'd dig in. "Really Sometimes" and "Could Be this Way" was one of few songs that escaped from this dark phase.
And about the "accept to play my game", it's about when you ask someone to lose control and let you assume so this person can get what he\she wants. But I'll definately work on that to make it more clear, thanks for the tip :]

Sun, September 27th, 2009 10:41am

Froodle

i like the flow of these lyrics. i was listening to a beat in my head while reading them haha it went nicely. I agree with Anson about that one line that needs work, as well as the line 'hand up yourself to this wave'. They are both somewhat jarring. Other than that, i like it =] nicely done

Mon, September 28th, 2009 1:33am

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Thanks for the tips and the kind comment. I'm really glad you like my work. I wrote this songs a long time ago, back in the days I was just 15 years old boy it was just learning how to speak in English. Today when I look back to my work I saw my gramma flaws, but I decided to keep them to remind me about my learning process, like old "stupid" scars...lol :]

Mon, September 28th, 2009 9:33am

Niau

uuuh, im not really good at poems :p I cant analyse them or find a beat like the above commenters :) But then again from a newbie at poems I think it's good :)The only thing I can point out is: If it is a song there is a thing under add new called song lyrics :) Use that if it is a song.

Mon, September 28th, 2009 4:59am

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Thank you very much for the comment. I'm glad you liked it. :]

Sat, October 3rd, 2009 10:50am

Richa Gupta

really nice poem ....well done

Mon, September 28th, 2009 5:12am

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Thank you very much for the comment :]

Sat, October 3rd, 2009 10:51am

Isabeau

I agree. Very well written.

Tue, September 29th, 2009 9:41pm

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Thank you very much!!! :]

Sat, October 3rd, 2009 11:48am

Death Holy

Interesting and what an enjoyable piece of writing. I noticed that you wrote it in a song form. Nice! So do you play an instrument? I would assume Guitar, but I don't know. Anyway, great piece.

Sun, October 4th, 2009 1:02am

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Thanks for the lovely comment. I don't play any instrument yet. But as soon as I can spend some time on classes I'd love to learn to play guitar. Thanks again for the comment :]

Sun, October 4th, 2009 6:13pm

kitty98

I think it's okay... sorry for that but it doesn't really sound like my type of music by the way the lyrics sound.

But don't let that discourage you I am pretty sure there's a lot of people who aren't as boneheaded as me =]

Sun, October 4th, 2009 1:49am

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No problem and you're not a bonehead..lol Actually I read your poems and I loved it. After I read them, I think there're some of my lyrics you may like it. These one were released in my latest works. I'll post them next. I hope I can keep counting with your feedback. :]

Sun, October 4th, 2009 7:49pm

Christina Longstaffe

I'd love to hear it with music! Thanks so much for sharing. :)

Sun, October 4th, 2009 6:49am

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Thanks so much for comment. I really appreciated it. I don't have the music avaiable yet. But I'll post it as soon as I have it. :]

Sun, October 4th, 2009 7:56pm

Fyregx

Great piece ^^
Keep me updated if you write anymore - I would love to read and comment on them (:

Sun, October 4th, 2009 12:54pm

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Thanks for the comment. Sure I will!! If you like, take a look on my other work "Dreams", it was the first song released from "Before The Lights... The Darkness". :]

Mon, October 5th, 2009 10:09am

BLynne

Touching.

Sun, October 4th, 2009 8:27pm

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Thanks for the comment :]

Mon, October 5th, 2009 10:11am

Broadway Fairy

This was good! Again, I'd love to hear it, but as it is, it is still good!=)

Mon, October 5th, 2009 7:47pm

Author
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Thanks for the kind words :]

Mon, October 26th, 2009 8:58pm

Randall Stone

I think everything has more or less been said but like all your work I'd love tohear them put to music. You have great talent.
God Bless,
Randall

Sat, October 10th, 2009 2:04am

Author
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Thank you very much, Randall. Your comment was much appreciated. As soon as I have the song I'll post here for you guys. :]

Sun, October 11th, 2009 10:04pm

Princess Aqua

This was the best song I ever read, are you a proffesinal in writing songs?

Sat, October 10th, 2009 5:34pm

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OMG!! Thank you so much, you're so sweet. I have been writting since I was 13 years old (today I'm 24... :p), but I never think about myself as a pro. I just love to do what I do. Specially, when people enjoy and are able to relate to what I composed.

Thank you again for you lovely comment. :]

Tue, October 13th, 2009 11:42pm

clarky

Wow, I really liked that, the structure of the song went well and seemed to flow quite easily too!!
My favourite part is the chorus! Keep up the great writing skills!!! :)

Fri, October 16th, 2009 10:29pm

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Thanks for the kind words. Your comment were very much appreciated. :]

Sat, October 24th, 2009 5:24pm

C.R.GRIFFITHS

Wow.. this is truely brilliant ! id love to hear your songs ! you truely have a gift ! and i hope you get talent spotted soon ! id buy your album !!! fantastic job !

Fri, November 6th, 2009 7:18pm

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Oh thank you very much. I'm honored to know that someone so gifted as you enjoyed my work. Thanks again. :]

Sat, November 7th, 2009 8:28pm

3piph4ny

I'm a bit of a poet too. I like this, and the chorus is awesome. Is the title in reference to Stephen King's short story?

Mon, November 9th, 2009 7:50am

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Thanks for comment, my friend. No, I'm a huge Stephen King's fan but this title isn't a reference to one of his works. Actually, I didn't know about that piece.. I'll check it out 'cause anythng written by the master is a welcome reading. Thanks again.

Sun, February 21st, 2010 8:04pm

Graeme Montrose

I like it, it flows smooth and is quite upbeat

Wed, January 6th, 2010 4:53pm

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Thanks for your comment, Graeme. I'm glad you liked it. :]

Mon, February 1st, 2010 8:06am

Black Enigma

Nice bro I loved the composition and I wish I could actually hear it:)

Sun, January 10th, 2010 6:48am

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Thanks for your comment, Black. Your inputs are always very appreciated. :]

Tue, January 19th, 2010 9:03am

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