The Age of Stars

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Science Fiction  |  House: Booksie Classic
This is my first novel and first time using a website like this. I'm looking for criticism of any kind. Thanks in advance!!

Not sure what content rating swearing gets. Some "light" profanity in there, if you're curious. Read at your own discretion.

For those who are big on names the name Xing is pronounced Ching. Note, in China, surnames come before given names.

This is an excerpt from near the beginning of my novel. It doesn't explain too much of how my character ended up there, but it explains his current situation and his reaction to it. It's sci-fi and takes places in the near future, but the focus isn't on the tech that much right now. It's more about the character.

Depending on how well I feel about the feedback I'll post some more. This is a part I recently edited and was hoping to get some fresh eyes.

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The Age of Stars

Submitted: December 29, 2014

This is my first novel and first time using a website like this. I'm looking for criticism of any kind. Thanks in advance!!

Not sure what content rating swearing gets. Some "light" profanity in there, if you're curious. Read at your own discretion.

For those who are big on names the name Xing is pronounced Ching. Note, in China, surnames come before given names.

This is an excerpt from near the beginning of my novel. It doesn't explain too much of how my character ended up there, but it explains his current situation and his reaction to it. It's sci-fi and takes places in the near future, but the focus isn't on the tech that much right now. It's more about the character.

Depending on how well I feel about the feedback I'll post some more. This is a part I recently edited and was hoping to get some fresh eyes.
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