Open Heart Surgery

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Submitted: April 14, 2013

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If u wanted me 2 ryt u a story, would it captivate u jus cauz I rote it? Doya think when u read this u actually gonna capture all da emotion I put in2 it? If I told u things I needed 2 get off ma chest, doya think it wud help u understand me better? Do u think I ask too many questions? What if I admitted that (1) I'm uncontrollably out of control, (2) well in tune with my soul, (3) insanely sane, yet (4) lackin in motivation... Would u (1) take a chance wid me? (2) think me conceited? wud u (3) trust me? N r u (4) prepared 2 be the inspiration I need? U said I hurt u, so I apologized n said it waz unintentional... Is da typer person u know me 2 be really capable of purposely hurtin u lyk dat? Do u forgive me? Lyk... R u sure u even really know me at all??? Do u think I said, n did stuff jus 2 impress u? Am I any less a gentleman cauz I didn't hold da door while you took ur tym walkin thru it? Any less a gentleman cauz even wen I wear formal clothes I atleast leav ma shirt un-tucked so that I feel comfortable? Well I didn't kiss u da other day we met onda road cauz I waz worried that people lookin at us myt get da rong impression of \"U\" cauz lyk u said, I'm jus a guy. I guess u jus didn't see that thru my eyes did u? Of all da tyms u verbally attacked and abused me, neva even once did I lay a harsh hand on u ryt? Dat waz cauz I promised myself dat if I made u cry, it would be 4rm laughter, or sum rare romantic moment I initiated. I mean, ur smile does things 2 me, so striking u waz neva eva among my thoughts, and in any case my upbringin doesn't condone such behavior. Bt I feel lyk... cauz I took da tym out 2 ryt stuff 2, n 4 u, cauz I sumtymz did things I didn't really want 2 inda name of ur happiness, n cauz I never fought or argued wid u dat u started takin ma feelinz towards u 4 granted. Guess u didn't think I would actually walk away 4rm u widout lookin back, even tho I distinctly remember bringin it up in the convo we had way b4 we agreed 2 come 2geda as an item. I jus don't get how u managed 2 make people believe dat our separation waz my fault, n no I'm not playin innocent, but u tested, so I hope u happy with the results.


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