'Emo Love'

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Bitter from the past :(

‘Emo Love’

My life won’t be
miserable when
you’re right here
with me.

Why won’t you
let me be your

I grasped the bottle
of wine in my hands
and threw it abruptly
on the floor.

I was so ashamed
of myself for loving
a person like you.

You broke my heart.
You found someone
else to love. You
made me fragile.

As I picked up the
broken bottle on the
floor I wittingly wounded
myself and uttered a curse.

I sat on the floor inside
my room where the wind
blew through my hair.

I grabbed a razor inside
my pocket and slash my
wrist with it.

Blood scattered all
over the floor and I
laughed frantically.

His memories are
burning inside of me.
I can’t let him go.
I just can’t.

He is a part of me.
A part of my everything.
My soul lives in him.

Submitted: July 11, 2010

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I love the pain you poured into this. I love it. I have been through similar things and i can relate.
-VD xoxo

Sun, July 11th, 2010 1:53pm


Thank you! Godspeed. Actually, I made out this poem inconsciously. I'll comment to one of your stories too.

Sun, July 11th, 2010 10:14pm

Vincey Delaney

oh, what a deep intense one!! This is so cleverly written, shows great emotions and lost hope!! Very well done!!

Wed, July 14th, 2010 7:24am


I based this through my experience :)

Wed, July 14th, 2010 12:30am

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