The Five Slot Key
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Book by: Fiction Queen
Five elements there were....five terrible elements....five elements which when brought together could change the very concept of life or...of death...
To start an avalanche of chaos and madness, of glory and murder...an avalanche brought about by one man, a man who was a Legend, a God, a Demon and most of all a Monster...but before he was all that, he was just a boy, a terrified boy !!!
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Submitted: October 12, 2013
Submitted: January 23, 2014
Recent Comments
itz really nice ...
wow *_*
I Loved it ! Just the kind of book I like to read. Just 1 complaint though. We haven't got enough of it. Release more soon :)
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Thank you :D
More to come as I complete the book ;)
Now do I have to wait till your book is published. Reading it made me feel like watching a movie.. It's awesome...
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Hey, thanks a lot :)
And I would really like to publish chapters as I finish them, but unfortunately most publishers will reject a book if it's already published online :(
That's the reason I have decided to stop publishing further chapters. But don't worry, hopefully in a year or two this book will be finished and if I manage to get published you can read all the chapters together without waiting for further updates :D
Hmm...the story is beginning to get more interesting. -_-
:)
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Thanks, urs is the first review for chapter 2 :D
you have depicted the scenes so well that they came before my eyes like some movie. And u have established ur plot very efficiently. it actually feels like a fantasy realm.
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Thank you so much, I'm really glad that u liked the story :)
Great eye to the detail. Keep up the good work. Only one comment - Try to just correct readability issue, use of 'he' sometimes is misleading.
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Hey thanks, and ya will proof read it once again...btw I really like your username "1st of so many" cool :D
Nice prologue.... It does pique the interest literally, though a few errors but an awesome try. Kudos for the way the scenarios were described.
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Thanks Kballu85, glad you liked it, I will try and improve as I continue ;)
Awesome prologue :) I'm just a rookie reader and I love medieval themes. The build was good and I'd have loved to read the dragon fight.
Keep righting. Cheers \\m/
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Hey thanks a lot Sandy, I'm glad you liked it, and the Dragon fight is in the next chapter, which continues onto the 3rd. Chapter 2 is already published (Just click on page "2" at the top ;)), will be really helpful if you can check that out as well :D
Thanks, and ya I know, will try to avoid them in the coming chapters, thanks for pointing them out :)
This is enthralling. Already I find myself immersed in the boy's life. Really interesting and suspenseful. There were a couple of grammatical errors. I did notice you tended to leave out a period at the end of the dialogue. It's easily over read and an easy mistake to make. Keep up the writing. XD
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