It's All About The Music (Etsure's contest)

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What music means.

It's All About The Music

It's about feelings

And stealing

It's about cuddling and loving

And pushing and shoving

It's about people being tense

And girls looking for a prince

It gets blamed for everything that goes wrong

But living life right never gets blamed on a song

Music is part of our lives

It makes us thrive

Turn it up loud

Dance and be proud

Rule the music you hear

Dont let it rule you like fear

There is a type of music for everyone

So let's sing and dance and have some fun


Submitted: October 10, 2009

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Etsure

love it! :D it has awesome rhythm and a good message.

Sat, October 10th, 2009 3:51am

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cool thank you.

Fri, October 9th, 2009 9:29pm

Mistress of Word Play

This is really good. Has almost a sing song tempo to it. The flow and verse structure and wording are wonderful. A great write.
Susan

Sat, October 10th, 2009 4:52am

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thank you

Fri, October 9th, 2009 10:38pm

Alessandra Fireheart

ooo I really enjoyed the rhythm of the poem. Everything flowed nice with a fun rhyme. And you did capture music. My favorite part was "Turn it up loud, dance and be proud." Nice. I envy your rhyming abilities. Personally, I think that along with any other sound elements are the hardest to create. Nice job. Good luck in the challenge.

Sat, October 10th, 2009 10:40pm

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cool. thanks alot.

Sat, October 10th, 2009 5:25pm

Brian W

Well written this is really good and yes you can almost sing it so it goes hand in hand with music

Mon, October 12th, 2009 12:33am

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thank you

Sun, October 11th, 2009 6:06pm

James Gueth

I hear they call a person who doesn't like any kind of music, a philistine. Music appeals to the soul. You don't have to dance.

I loved this

James

Fri, November 20th, 2009 5:22pm

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Sat, January 30th, 2010 9:57pm

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