Just My Dream
as you lean in to kiss me lightly
your eyes light up ever so
brightly
and as you lean in to touch my smooth skin
how i wish to pull you closer in
as you pull your lips
back from mine
how your taste lingers as a sweet wine
my knees are now a bit weak
but no matter it is your
lips that mine again want to seek
your eyes make it hard to move
and over my skin your hands soothe
i am going
to lose control soon
and what a romantic time here under the stars and moon
please give my lips one more
touch
now you have my body craving yours so much
with your hand upon my thigh
while laying under the starlit
sky
press your body closer to mine
mmm, the way i feel when you let out that soft,soft whine
i really want to
be with you tonight
and those beautiful eyes shining bright
please love me and make me scream
for when i awake
i know it will will be nothing more than a dream
you belong to her that is so
but i could love you like you would never
know
so here in my bed, eyes closed tight
i will always dream of you and your eyes so bright
Submitted: October 06, 2009
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EdwardJBradleySr
FiestyMomma:
Tue, October 6th, 2009 10:10pmMost effectively romantic, heartfelt and well written. Excellent use of rhyme and rhythm.
Suggest skipping a line between intended verses. Will help the presentation by making it more inviting to other readers.
Gave it an "I Like It" vote. Well deserved. Will read and vote for your other postings. At times, without commenting.
Thank you for becoming a fan. Most appreciative.
Happy trails,
Ed Bradley.
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Ed,
Tue, October 6th, 2009 5:23pmthank you so much for the vote, compliment, and especially the advice.