Just My Dream

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Fantasy  |  House: Booksie Classic

You always have your dreams.

Just My Dream

as you lean in to kiss me lightly
your eyes light up ever so brightly
and as you lean in to touch my smooth skin
how i wish to pull you closer in
as you pull your lips back from mine
how your taste lingers as a sweet wine
my knees are now a bit weak
but no matter it is your lips that mine again want to seek
your eyes make it hard to move
and over my skin your hands soothe
i am going to lose control soon
and what a romantic time here under the stars and moon
please give my lips one more touch
now you have my body craving yours so much
with your hand upon my thigh
while laying under the starlit sky
press your body closer to mine
mmm, the way i feel when you let out that soft,soft whine
i really want to be with you tonight
and those beautiful eyes shining bright
please love me and make me scream
for when i awake i know it will will be nothing more than a dream
you belong to her that is so
but i could love you like you would never know
so here in my bed, eyes closed tight
i will always dream of you and your eyes so bright


Submitted: October 06, 2009

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EdwardJBradleySr

FiestyMomma:

Most effectively romantic, heartfelt and well written. Excellent use of rhyme and rhythm.

Suggest skipping a line between intended verses. Will help the presentation by making it more inviting to other readers.

Gave it an "I Like It" vote. Well deserved. Will read and vote for your other postings. At times, without commenting.

Thank you for becoming a fan. Most appreciative.

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Tue, October 6th, 2009 10:10pm

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Ed,

thank you so much for the vote, compliment, and especially the advice.

Tue, October 6th, 2009 5:23pm

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