* Rainfall *

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic
This is my first attempt at a poem in Rictameter form (thanks to Classy Peach's suggestion!) I've never tried this before, so I don't know how this one comes accross to readers. Please let me know your honest opinion and suggestions so I can improve. Thanks! :)

Submitted: June 15, 2008

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Rainfall

Pounding the roof

Tears falling from Heaven

Warming the inside of my heart

Putting an end to the sorrow and pain

Slowly transforming the sadness

That the whole world burdens

So all may love

Rainfall


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