Dont open that Door

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Humor  |  House: Booksie Classic

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its about a guy and he walks into something that he shouldnt, and now there might be a problem

Tom had came home from work, he was tired and all he wanted to do was go to sleep, he headed up the stairs. When he got to the top of the stairs he headed to his door, then all of a sudden, he had got this urge to use the bathroom, " dang, i knew i shouldnt of dranked all of them beers," he said, closing his door, he rushed to the bathroom as fast as he could.

As tom opened the door, he suddenly  realized that his bestfriends girlfriend was in there taking a shower.

At the same time, Suzy had just opened the shower curtin.

  Miraculously, two of stood there in shock for 5 seconds, Tom dropped his wallet from his hand.

From the shower curtin she pulled, she said, “ Tom get out of here, I’m telling David that your peeping at me.

“ No”,  said Tom, “ Lets just calm down, i didnt know that you were in here, I’m sorry, you dont want to tell him about this. “ i disagree,” moaned Suzy. “

We must not tell him anything, he is a jeleous person ok, now I’m going to go now.”

 But neither one could move, ahead, looming larger, were David comming up the stairs.

Tom quickly shut the door, while Suzy quickly put her robe on. Finally David made it up the stairs, Suzi just shut the bathroom door behind her. “Hey babe, how was work, I missed you,” she said. “ I missed you too, you just got out the shower, and where’s Tom.” He asked.

 “ He’s in his room as always, now lets go in the room.” She said. “ Ok let me just go use the restroom, i really have to go pee.” He says. She laughs, “ Ok, but hurry.” She says. He goes into the bathroom, and shuts the door, 3 minutes later, he opens the door with a quetioned face. “ Babe, you said that you took a shower right?” he asked. “ Yeah, why.” She asked.

“ Then why is Tom’s wallet in here?” ......................................

Submitted: January 13, 2009

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Welcome! Have to say I'm just scrounging around for something to read and I stumbled upon your story. I like it. The little twist was good because I thought they might get away with it! Even though nothing happened... Maybe just a little tinkering with the format. Good piece.

Wed, January 14th, 2009 9:05pm


thanx, im glad you liked it

Thu, January 15th, 2009 7:31am

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