The Beauty Floats

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

seeing something so beautiful, in your own eyes, this descriptice poem is showing you what others think.

Soft flowers floating in the canal alone, streaming slowly in the sunset.

The water so calm and warm, misty blue and low.

Walking along the streaming water with the beautiful flower. Saying the last goodbyes.

Trying to hold the last moments with it, seeing its beauty and the perfect picture of its leaving.

As the flower turn in circles while it floats. The smell dissolves into the air. The sun going down, the wind becoming alive and dancing in the air,

and a beautiful melody surrounding me. Still streaming down the canal,

I sit down and cross my legs, holding myself.

It’s gone, the beauty left, but I still have memories.


Submitted: May 19, 2010

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E Cluff

This is very beautiful, I feel myself there beside the water, absorbed in the beauty of the moment. Well done.

Wed, May 19th, 2010 1:41pm

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thank you so much!!!! ^_^

Thu, May 20th, 2010 2:08am

ILuvYuh4Life

I really like this I like

Thu, May 20th, 2010 1:34pm

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thank you, am glad you liked it.

Fri, May 21st, 2010 1:38am

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