"The Noose"

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

My newest poem I wrote ^_^

an you see the raindrops falling
falling to the ground
washing away dreams and memoires
faded oh so fast
living like an outcast

your hope is nailed to the wall
your pain is like 100 knifes in your flesh
your dreams are burning, burning to be free

open your wings and soar
release your fear and open your heart
stich your wounds and ease your pain
it doesnt have to be over

watching your hand close one last time
around the noose thats around your neck
does it have to be ths way?
has no one cared enough for you to stay?

the pain started slowly
creeping through your mind
eclipsed behind your panited smile
can anyone see the sorrow in your eyes?

suffcation, your eyes are bleeding
your body hangs lifless, no note was left


Submitted: November 18, 2009

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OMG THIS WAS SO GOOD, I WAS TRULY MOVED BY THIS PIECE.

Sat, November 28th, 2009 11:06pm

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