Day 1 chapter 2

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Mystery and Crime  |  House: Booksie Classic
Havnt added anything in a while figured i would continue see where it goes...on the thirteenth day.

Submitted: July 10, 2008

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It was unusual for Marie to end up here on a surprise visit.
Considering we hadn't been able to get along after our seperation,
I quickly developed a sense of concern.  " Is everything alright?"
I asked.  Her voice was calm, somehow still able to fill my body with
chills.  "May I come in"?  Something was wrong.

I wasn't exactly sure what to expect to fly out of her mouth.  The fear I
felt when she walked in suddenly turned to curiousity.  She kept quiet for some
time, gathering her thoughts I would presume.  I invited her into the kitchen
where we both sat down across from eachother.  The awkward silence was broken by
her voice.  "It's Katie.  It's been two days and she hasn't home, hasn't called
and hasn't been seen by anyone."  Our daughter could be rebelious at times, sneaking
in and out, drinking and smoking.  She always displayed typical teenage behavior though
she never slept out without calling.  Creeping in an hour past her curfue was as far as
she went. 

"Well we got into a fight", Marie said.  " I told her she was to stop seeing this boy she's
been sneaking around with.  I tried to bite my tounge but I had to tell her.  He is no good
for her.  I gave it time, I figured I could be wrong but I knew.  He's just no good.  "It's
my fault".y

"Now relax", I said.  It was a huge relief hearing she left after a fight."Give it a little more time.
 I'll try to call her but believe me she will be home.  And when she does come home, it's
where she's going to stay for a long long time. Mark my words".


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