Haiku Weather and Season Collections
Poem by: FlameandAxe
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Thunderstorm:
Water falling down
Sparkling the crowded city
The thunder and rain
Winter:
White paths beneath me
Very cold and very pale
Winter has come
Summer 1:
The sun had shone
The hot weather has come
Its summer time
Summer 2:
Plants and animals rise
With happiness of summer
Forest is alive
Autumn:
Running in the field
Leaves and flowers falling down
I love the autumn
Submitted: December 10, 2012
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I liked Thunderstorm and Summer Two the best. But I agree with Archia, you describe each season/storm really well making me believe that I am actually on the scene experiencing what is happening. Now I have a question for you. Which is your favorite season?? :D
~future author
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Archia
I love how each haiku really made it feel like what it was describing. I think my favourite was Autumn, that one was really beautiful. They all were though.
Mon, December 10th, 2012 7:18amAuthor
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Thanks! I'm interested in Haiku since the first time I saw it. So, I tried to make some.
Mon, December 10th, 2012 6:23am