Eros' Error

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Eros' Error

Status: Finished

Eros' Error

Poem by: flavoredair

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Genre: Poetry

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See me beyond the ideal in your head. I'm a person!

Summary

See me beyond the ideal in your head. I'm a person!

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Submitted: October 01, 2009

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Submitted: October 01, 2009

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Eros’ Error
My sweet paramour
You are blinded by
Shots to the heart
And please forgive the question
But I
Scrutinize obsession
Your love’s too quick for me
I challenge your validity
Dazzle once
Dazzle twice
I think you’re in for a surprise
I don’t see
What you are seeing
How do you feel
What your feeling?
 
Eros’ Error
Dulcet caviler
You deftly fake words
So insincere
I can’t be
 Your big chance
Of happiness
At a glance 
Your love’s too quick for me
I challenge your validity
 
Eros’ error
Juke jive dancing fool
You tip tap toe dance
Around
The issue
Your riddles, rhymes, reasons dear
Ultimately aren’t so clear
Your pedestal is set too high
How do you see me in the sky?
 
Eros’ error
Oh
Eros’ error
No
 
 
 


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