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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic

no hope in life ,darkness ,then you show up

i am standing in a crowd but no one notices me

its because i havent even made a small sound

i am not breathing but i am alive

i am just trying to dissapear into the background

i dont wanna be anywhere near the light

i want to be invisable  

i want you all to let me dissapear  




the shadows of death are coming for me

There coming for us all  so let them come

But let me be the one they come for today

I wanna dissapear, i am standing right in front of you

But i was invisable to you a long time ago ,

I want to melt into the strange darkness

A darkness that has no sound only rain and fear

And in that pouring rain i can hide my tears

And in the blackness i hide my fears and pain.




i stand  up and raise my hands twards the black sky

Cupping drops of rain and blood in my hands

They are the tears of my brothers and of angels

And the blood from lost souls crying out for justice

The tears show the scars of my pain and of glory .

 the blood opens wounds in me that were allready closed

its the blood of won and lost battles of love and of hate

and of  love ones dying and children crying and of broken dreams

but In the darkness i feel a fate more glourious then i can imagine

i see  love coming twards me ,she is beautifu inside and out

 and i waited my whole life for her .,,,<,

Submitted: May 02, 2011

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Wow..this poem was so touching...a part of it described me.Very nice :d Click !

Tue, May 10th, 2011 5:09pm


thanx ,, i like you allready

Tue, May 10th, 2011 12:13pm

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