Hooked on the Show

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

This poem is based on an anime I was watching online, basically I realised that even though I love it and it makes me laugh so much, it was stopping me from doing homework and studying so I had to tone it down a bit :)

I was incredibly bored when I wrote this :)

 

The other day I saw something, which made me want to laugh
There was no intense storyline, nor playback from the past
No one had to die, and no one ran away
In fact, nothing really happened, but I laughed anyway
 
It made me stop to think, if I could ever find
Something that could make me, as carefree as their kind
For all the people that I watched make jokes and act their acts
They didn't really think much, about the truth or facts
 
There were no magic dragons, or knights in shining armour
Nor superheros, or maidens with some ungodly drama
The characters I met, they made me laugh so much
I really enjoyed watching, while I ate my lunch
 
One was 'simply fabulous', a queen among his men
I laughed as he dramatised, superbly till the end
Afterwards, I did not feel like homework or studies
But then I told myself, why I've got other buddies
 
These buddies that I have, they all go to school
I would never see them, unless I went there too
I've just started watching, and I know I sound hooked
I really do not want, my brain to end up cooked
 
I enjoy doing other things, I read do sport and play
I can always come back to these funny people, any another day
I got carried away, but it really made me laugh
 
And now when I feel like watching, for long periods of time
I really must remember that there is a whole world out there for me to find.
 
 
 
 
 
ATTEMPTED MORAL: Don't remain hooked on your computer, the tv or video games. You need to get out in the world as well because those things are not going anywhere and will always be there when you come back.


Submitted: May 04, 2011

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Dinka

I love it! This is great... what anime were you watching?... I felt that way when I watched CANDY CANDY. But i watched it during summer so i didn't have to miss homework. By the way you should watche that one the best anime and movie i had ever watched!!!! Good Job i liked you poem!!!!

Wed, May 4th, 2011 2:43am

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Ok I will keep CANDY CANDY in mind lol

Sun, May 22nd, 2011 12:57am

Imagine Words

I like the moral in this, good job it definately got me hooked :D good job yet again ^_^

Mon, May 30th, 2011 1:54pm

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Wow thanks

Mon, May 30th, 2011 10:41pm

BeautifullyPure

nice poem! i love it! good job

Tue, June 21st, 2011 2:29am

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ha ha thankyou :D

Mon, June 20th, 2011 11:44pm

greenallie2000

Superb writing! i enjoy the moral of this poem too. i am forever addicted to reading and writing. is writing about doing things such as sports or outdoor games consider inactive and not in the world? because i sure do get exhausted playing soccer in my head. lol... Ahh... a true couch-potato :)

Wed, August 17th, 2011 8:40am

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Thankyou so much XD
Aaah I love rainy days when I have an excuse to stay inside and read XD

Wed, August 17th, 2011 2:03am

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