The Angels' Song

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Thrillers  |  House: Booksie Classic

Don't stay at home on a rainy night...... when no one can hear you


I am all alone this night, no one can hear me, but I can hear them
It is raining and I have drawn the curtains closed
Even if I cover my ears, I can still hear them,
 I can still hear the angels
Their song is barely audible, through the hammering of the rain
It slithers through my window
Wrapping round my limbs, torturing my brain
The song of the angels
Evil words of unknown notes, words that speak of the pain forthcoming
Excruciating, agonising, mind-numbing horrors
Screams of torture and merciless despair
The fate of all those who be doomed
It is in the very air I breathe, soaking into my skin, my hair, my mind
A rhythmic beat, drums I can't escape
There are no sweet chimes of mercy,
In the angels' song
I shut my eyes, cover my ears, hide under my blanket, I am desperate
But their grip on me is tighter than ever
I know they are coming, they will not stop
I can't save myself
They are moving, my window is cracking, the curtains are blowing
But why is there wind, when my window is still shut?
I tremble, the rain is lessoning, the song louder
They are still coming, still singing
The rain has stopped, the window has smashed, glass everywhere
I am all alone this night, no can hear me,
I wish it was still raining, then I might not hear
The angels' song.
The gates are open, I can feel the heat of the inferno beyond
This is my fate, I can't avoid it, but I'm scared
Above my screams
I can still hear the angels

Submitted: March 30, 2011

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that was cool i really like it good job....

Wed, March 30th, 2011 11:41am


thanks :)

Wed, March 30th, 2011 6:09am

lost in translation

This is really good. You drawed me in with the first verse, and the suspense was superb building to the climax. Great job. If you have time could you check out my FALLEN FROM GRACE poem. It would be much appreciated. L.I.T.

Wed, March 30th, 2011 3:03pm


Thankyou :D

Sun, May 22nd, 2011 12:58am


A lovely poem :D

Sat, May 7th, 2011 8:54am


Thankyou :)

Sun, May 22nd, 2011 12:56am

Imagine Words

Another nice poem :D

Mon, May 30th, 2011 1:56pm


Thanks :)

Mon, May 30th, 2011 10:42pm


Dang! So....i can't describe it!

Sun, July 31st, 2011 8:48am


Thanks a bunch XD

Sun, July 31st, 2011 4:30am


Wow! Hauntingly beautiful, i would say:)


Fri, August 19th, 2011 12:07am


thanks :)

Thu, August 18th, 2011 8:59pm


Hi Flowerstag, My first read on your work and enjoyed it throughly - very well written. Chow for now

Thu, September 1st, 2011 4:50pm


thankyou for reading it :D

Fri, September 2nd, 2011 10:16pm


Amazing , enjoyed reading it ,very picturesque

Fri, March 23rd, 2012 11:19pm


thankyou muchly ^_^

Fri, March 23rd, 2012 4:59pm


Your poem is very descriptive and took me on an emotional roller coaster. Your words flow smoothly, and have a sort of lyrical essence to them. I loved the poem, good job!

Fri, March 30th, 2012 7:53am


thankyou! :D

Fri, March 30th, 2012 1:24am


There was a lot of very vivid imagery in this poem and I really enjoyed reading it. It has a very good structure - James.

Thu, April 19th, 2012 3:01pm


thankyou very much, I enjoyed writing it :D

Sun, April 22nd, 2012 3:11am

Author Unknown

This is really good! Well done,I love it!

Thu, March 15th, 2018 5:24pm

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