Gelatin Chapter 1

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I always wanted to loose weight and now that I have I never thought it would out like this.

Submitted: October 12, 2009

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Have you ever tried to lose weight and never been able. Are you sick of all the other girls getting the boys while your stuck at home watching this. Order today and well give you the first months supply of our weight crushers diet free. Our formula works like this the more of our food you eat the more you loose. That commercial was playing in my head over and over again as I walked to school. It seemed to good to be true. Even if it doesnt work I can still get a free months supply of food. I greeted my 2 friends Susy and sally as I walked in our schools entrance. I got to a private school so most of the girls here are preppy. I am in seventh grade now and I'm as dumb as a monkey. My only true talents are eating and the my dreams of being a gymnastic. Hey Laura laughed on of the preppiesy girls of the school, her name was katrina and she had all the boys attention lucky her slim body and long blonde shiny hair told you that she was the one to be jealous of and I was. o I had to get that stuff soon and fast. So laura what size do you take infinity I me it's a good thing we live in Texas it's about the only place big enough to fit your big butt. My face is full of fury now I hate it when people make fun of me about my weight. But like always I'm just gonna have to blow it off. The last time I lost my temper I broke a girls arm and her nose. She hasn't come to school since then. What gets me really mad about katrina is that she is an amazing gymnastic, someday if I cut these pounds off I shut her up real fast with my gymnastic skills. If only things were as easy as that. As soon as I got home that day I picked up the phone and dialed the phone number that was written. 888-9554 was the number for my greatest triumph. Hello how may I help you I heard in a high pitched tone that sounded like a bird twitting. Hi I'm laurie, last name please the women replied, ernestly I answered back, Crosbie. I would like to order a full year of slim fast. Okay thank you for ordering we will be delivering your food today and you'll get you're first weeks food supply tommorrow. Have a good day and a gooodnight. To be continued in the next chapter . Will right it out tommorrow . Goodnight everybody


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