Reflections of water

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic

really cool


Submitted: April 08, 2010

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joshua boyde

Kool =)

though more white space and line-breaks would give a stronger reflection effect... IMHO

Thu, April 8th, 2010 12:05pm

littlelin

like this one very much, especially your description of reflection and the way you reflected your writing.

Sat, April 10th, 2010 10:52pm

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