Words work

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Song Lyrics  |  House: Booksie Classic

Believe it

If anyones listening if anyone cares. If anyones been there. If anyone hears. I'm scared that you don't feel my prayers. All the times I took for granted pushing you into walls. Forgive me for being that kid. Who's been the one to brung him down. But now I'm gonna make a difference. Change the words that he's been listening. 

Chorus: Count your words everday. Sometimes life is made of what you say. Keep them to yourself. Unless there's used to help.

 Can't possible understand the pain. Till you've known a brighter day. Give hope, not hate.  Forgive, but don't forget your friends.  

Chorus: Send the message. That you've carried and never let go of all the burdens that others are holding on to. Who they are was once you too.  Show love even to the homeless. Then you'll know how to fight someane elses storm.  

 Words heal can word kill. Ive heard words that hurt. So carefull what you say don't let them slip away. What trail will your words walk. Who will your words feel?  


Submitted: March 13, 2010

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Its interesting, I like it but is it a poem or song lyrics. Anyway its pretty good. And by the way I published two more poems called Can You Figure Me Out and another one with the same title onlt with a (2). Good poem/song lyrics.

Sat, March 13th, 2010 11:29pm


I like it! It all fits together perfectly! Keep up the good work!

Sun, March 14th, 2010 4:40am


i really like this its interesting and good :)

Sun, March 14th, 2010 5:38am

Mistress of Word Play

You did great on this. Wisdom in the words you wrote. I think it was just amazing. Susan :)

Sun, March 14th, 2010 10:20pm

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