do you miss me?

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

this is a very simple poem that i wrote when i felt like nobody would miss me if i died

Do you miss me?
Now im gone.
Do you miss me?
Now you’re free of me.
Do you miss me?
Now I won’t be there.
Do you miss me?
Now im under the ground
Do you miss me?
Now I can’t stop you.
Do you miss me?
Now the chair next to you is empty.
Do you miss me?
Now ive taken my last breath.
Do you miss me?
Now all blood has drained from my veins
Do you miss me?
No


Submitted: May 15, 2008

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Wobster

Wow, its like a continuation from your last poem. They fit perfectly together,and you got a good point, we mourn for a while but after a while we forget and we move on, we stop missing them. What would the dead think if they rose and found us all happy, their best friend having forgotten all about them, your superb, love everything you write, very thought invoking, keep it up.

Thu, May 15th, 2008 8:58pm

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thanks again... and they werent meant to be a continuation but were written at the same time so of course my feelings were the same... thanks i never noticed that

Sat, May 17th, 2008 9:56am

Trainman238

WOW this is such a true poem...

Sat, May 17th, 2008 8:17pm

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thanks

Sun, May 18th, 2008 4:22am

Jbortti

Great one , but sad. To feel alone isn't good at all, and someone always will miss us .

Mon, May 19th, 2008 2:16pm

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thanks and yeah i know you will always be missed... but at the time i wrote this i felt like i wouldnt be

Mon, May 19th, 2008 9:35am

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