Submitted: May 15, 2008
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WOW this is such a true poem...
Sat, May 17th, 2008 8:17pm
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thanks
Sun, May 18th, 2008 4:22am
Great one , but sad. To feel alone isn't good at all, and someone always will miss us .
Mon, May 19th, 2008 2:16pm
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thanks and yeah i know you will always be missed... but at the time i wrote this i felt like i wouldnt be
Mon, May 19th, 2008 9:35amFacebook Comments
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Wow, its like a continuation from your last poem. They fit perfectly together,and you got a good point, we mourn for a while but after a while we forget and we move on, we stop missing them. What would the dead think if they rose and found us all happy, their best friend having forgotten all about them, your superb, love everything you write, very thought invoking, keep it up.
Thu, May 15th, 2008 8:58pmAuthor
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thanks again... and they werent meant to be a continuation but were written at the same time so of course my feelings were the same... thanks i never noticed that
Sat, May 17th, 2008 9:56am