why did things end up like this?, poem by foreverflorence

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this is a poem i wrote for a girl a used to really like and she was messing up her life so i wrote this to give to her only i never did. im sorry if anyone reading this smokes or does drugs but im against it so dont be offended please

Submitted: May 15, 2008

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Submitted: May 15, 2008

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Why do you do this to me?

When I love you so?

Why do you not care?

Tell me to leave you alone?

Why won’t you stop taking

That **** called weed?

Why is it that my heart

You must mislead?

Why is it every night,

You sleep with another guy?

Why do you smoke?

I don’t want you to die!

Why is it that when I told you

You laughed at me?

And why is it

That I thought you liked me?

Why do I remember

Our drunken kiss?

Why did things

End up like this?

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Stephanee

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Thu, May 15th, 2008 1:42pm

This is a really powerful poem. I liked it a lot because of the emotion that your words carry. Can't wait to read more of your writings!

Stephanee :)

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Comment | 27 words

Sat, May 17th, 2008 9:48am

thanks... the reason my words carry emotion is because i only write about things that are happening to me... will post more stuff when i write it

Wobster

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Thu, May 15th, 2008 2:02pm

is this based on true events, I am so sorry. I know, guys can be real pigs, I am a guy so this must sound funny coming from me, we're all pigs in nature, some just fight it more than others. I loved this poem, it really did nearly bring me to tears, I hate seeing a girl suffering like that, mistreated when she should be treasured and treated as a goddess, you all deserve better. And yeah, drugs and boose does have that effect on people, my mom's dad was an alcoholic and she could tell you how bad it was. I loved it, it made me cry but I loved it, can't wait for more.

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Sat, May 17th, 2008 10:01am

thanks and you dont need to apologize for guys cause this poem wasnt to a guy it was to a girl... yeah drugs and alchol do take their toll... they change a person but i guess thats a part of life... thank you again for commenting

Trainman238

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Sat, May 17th, 2008 12:17pm

This is REALLY good and REALLY sad. It made me cry thinking about how so many people have to go through all of that when they really shouldn't have to.
But this is REALLY good work. keep it up!

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Sat, May 17th, 2008 12:22pm

yeah it really sucks. thank you for the comment

Jbortti

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Mon, May 19th, 2008 7:14am

Good one ! You friend did not know how luck she is for having you as friend. And Drugs are terrible things we should avoid . You did well talking about it.

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Mon, May 19th, 2008 9:32am

thanks... and yeah i told her that and its was lucky... shes changed and we are no longer friends... :( thanks