why did things end up like this?
Poem by: foreverflorence
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Submitted: May 15, 2008
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is this based on true events, I am so sorry. I know, guys can be real pigs, I am a guy so this must sound funny coming from me, we're all pigs in nature, some just fight it more than others. I loved this poem, it really did nearly bring me to tears, I hate seeing a girl suffering like that, mistreated when she should be treasured and treated as a goddess, you all deserve better. And yeah, drugs and boose does have that effect on people, my mom's dad was an alcoholic and she could tell you how bad it was. I loved it, it made me cry but I loved it, can't wait for more.
Thu, May 15th, 2008 9:02pmThis is REALLY good and REALLY sad. It made me cry thinking about how so many people have to go through all of that when they really shouldn't have to.
But this is REALLY good work. keep it up!
Good one ! You friend did not know how luck she is for having you as friend. And Drugs are terrible things we should avoid . You did well talking about it.
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Stephanee
This is a really powerful poem. I liked it a lot because of the emotion that your words carry. Can't wait to read more of your writings!
Thu, May 15th, 2008 8:42pmStephanee :)
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thanks... the reason my words carry emotion is because i only write about things that are happening to me... will post more stuff when i write it
Sat, May 17th, 2008 9:48am