Hurry Back

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

Inspired by the lyrics "you're so typical, you're so predictable," and the thought of a golden boy in a small town where all of the girls that fit the description of a normal golden boy's interest are limited to four. The result is an imperfect golden boy, who doesn't always get what he wants.

Love may be delicate to their world

And I know, we're just a joke to them

But we may just be something to laugh at anyway

We flirt endlessly, giggle continually

But is that all for you?

Because a part of me is waiting for the day

Your mom won't say no to us together

But will you still want to be with me then?

Or will you have moved on to another girl?

With her for a few months before you're out

Off to the next one

And I know the cycle of girls

And that I'm one of the stops along the way

Before you start all over again

I can live with being the only one to let you in

The only one to believe you

When you say always

The only one to say it back

And the only one to hurt

When you move on to the next one

And start flirting with them

Because even if they don't return it

I'll always want it

And be green for it

But I know I just have to wait it out

Until you come back to me

And since I'm one of the four stops

It won't take too long

So hurry back

While I still want you so bad

Submitted: May 01, 2011

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glitter snow426

so tender, sweet but sad too!! This certainly is a PRECIOUS GEM, VERY HEARTWARMING!!!

Sun, May 1st, 2011 4:33pm


Thanks, I just got to thinking about what would happen if you got one of those "stereotypes" out of their natural habitat. A golden boy in a small town, where there are not hundreds of girls at his feet to choose from. And a native girl, accostumed to long-lived romances.

Mon, May 2nd, 2011 4:48pm


A beautiful piece of work.......I will agree with glitter snow426 , this is a very heartwarming poem...KMU?

Thu, July 14th, 2011 5:43pm


Thanks!! Sure, I'll definitely keep you updated. :)

Thu, July 14th, 2011 2:19pm


it really amazes me how you come up with your work because its so good! its so cute and sweet! love it.:)

Thu, July 14th, 2011 11:20pm

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