Out Of My Heart

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic

This is a short short short story about a girl who's revealing what she feels about someone special... About someone that she wants to be out of her heart.... Enjoy!

When you thought that you were willing to give that person one more chance…

They completely take advantage of it.

First, they leave you disappointed and shocked.

Then, they leave you sad and hurting.

After, they leave you shattered and in pain.

Last, they leave you in tears and rage.

No message, no calls… not even a single note.

It’s like they just disappeared in the center of the earth.

They tell you they care, but really they don’t.

They tell you they love you, but no they don’t.

They tell you that they’ll always be there, but truly they won’t,

There are times that they leave you worried and lonely. But once you ask them where they were, you just have to hope that what they say is true.

And when you find out that it’s not, your heart is filled with unimaginable rage and pain. It is like they stab you and put something in that wound to make you feel numb inside.

But once the numbness goes away, all you can feel is powerful rage and hot tears that are uncontrollable and are travelling down your cheeks.

Once they’re out of your heart, there’s nothing they can do to get back in.

Submitted: July 08, 2010

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omg! one of my closest mates going thru something similar to this...well done its really good, is it based on real life experience?

Thu, July 8th, 2010 4:56pm


Yeah... Pretty much.... I get all I write at something that I feel. So basically, it really is from the heart. =) Anyways, thanks so much for reading! =)) Hope you liked it, even though it's kinda sad and lonely. =)

Thu, July 8th, 2010 9:59pm


This was really good. I really liked it. It was definitely worth the time reading this. =)

Mon, July 12th, 2010 3:32pm


=)))) Aww!!! That really made my day! =))) Thanks! =))) And it was really good to write when people like you her in Booksie like it. =))) Thanks for reading! =)

Mon, July 12th, 2010 7:30pm


Aww, i read it at facebook my freaky dear.. :]

Fri, July 30th, 2010 4:08am

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