My Final Good-bye

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I got really bored, so I decided to write a poem! I hope you like it! It's about a girl, who has a broken heart. She fell in love with one of her friends, she had fought with him and laughed with him, she fell in love with who he was. But when he found out she loved him he changed, he became cruel and mean. This is her letter, saying her final good-bye. She says good-bye because she doesn't love him anymore, so the letter is like her 'love' is leaving.


My final goodbye

By: Foreverwishes


Today I sit and think about,

Everything we’ve been through.

I’d have to say,

You had no clue.


Now I go into my thoughts,

Into my heart.

I guess we may have fought a lot,

But I loved you from the start.


To be honest,

I fell in love with the guy I knew.

You replaced him,

My feelings you had no clue.


How did I not notice?

You and I could never be.

I wish that you were still my friend,

But if I told you that, you’d flee.


Why did I have to realize,

My heart yearned for you.

Why didn’t I see?

We weren’t meant to be.


I say this with love,

It’s your fault I write this.

I guess it’s time to say,

My heart is full of bliss.


I always knew,

My feelings for you would die.

So I sit and write,

My final goodbye.


Say good bye to the girl you knew,

For she’s changing for the better.

I won’t be gone,

Just changed.


All because of this letter.

Submitted: October 22, 2011

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Aaaaw! It's so sad. But the great thing about this is, is that some girls may be able to relate to this.
I liked it, the way you covered the of the problem.
Nicely written!


Sat, October 22nd, 2011 8:26pm


Thank-you! I am so glad you like it!!

Sat, October 22nd, 2011 1:28pm

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