Truth of world.

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

poem about a mother telling her son who is crying after she gets shoot about the world.

My Dear Boy,

Hold your cries.

Open your eyes.

Look around at this empty world.

A world of disarray.

Where death comes everyday.

Where humans so vile live.

We don't understand it at all.

All we can do is try not to fall.

Struggle through life.

Fight to survive everyday.

Look for help with dismay.

Wish to be loved.

Beg to be seen.

Pray for our "souls" to be clean.

And yet we still carry on.

I swear you will be alright.

You can be all you can be.

Ill be leaving you tonight.

So my dear Boy,

Try for me.

 

 


Submitted: February 23, 2012

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kaotora

I like the flow. :) hope you might check out some of my poems.

Thu, February 23rd, 2012 9:35pm

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thx and yeah ill check them out when i can.

Thu, February 23rd, 2012 2:00pm

BlackR0se

I like the ryming

Thu, February 23rd, 2012 10:09pm

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lol thank you

Thu, February 23rd, 2012 2:12pm

Darktiara14

I like it it is very rhythmic and flows beautifully!! I loved it!:)

Thu, February 23rd, 2012 10:18pm

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thank you glad u liked it

Thu, February 23rd, 2012 4:47pm

Randomsox

It flows very well and very nice work with the rhyming and overall a great poem! :D please if you have any time what so ever please check out my works! :)

Fri, February 24th, 2012 5:25am

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ty and yeah ill check out your work soon.

Fri, February 24th, 2012 10:41am

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