under the dark shadow

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Fantasy  |  House: Booksie Classic

What would you do if you were in a terrible situation?

It was really cold and I couldn't stand it anymore.I was looking around the room.suddenly a dark shadow surrounded the room.

I couldn't see anything.I got up to pick up a candle.I kept my eyes open to see something in that darkness and find the candles.I was walking slowly with short steps and open arms to touch things around myself.
Suddenly,a terrible sound of lightning scared me.I screamed and starded running in the room ,but unfortunatly I fell down and I felt bad pain in my leg.
I was confused and I really didn't know what I could do!I stood up and realized that something strange was walking on my hand.I was scared and I tried to kill it,but it creeped on my face.I starded running without any purpose.
Suddenly,I fell down from my bed and at that time, I woke up and I realized that I was in my room in a summer day and those events were just a nightmare.

Submitted: September 03, 2015

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Sat, September 5th, 2015 6:40pm


The suspense in the story is catchy. Made me read it completely. Nicely done!

Sun, September 6th, 2015 5:35pm


Thanks for your kindness and encouragement

Sun, September 6th, 2015 12:08pm

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