My House

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Just a little poem about a house

My house is a lovely house

My house sits upon a hill

My house faces the eastern sky

Where you can watch the sun rise

In a clear blue sky

My house is filled with love and joy

Because of little girls and boys

My house is filled with happiness

My house is filled warmth

My house is filled with toys

My house has a lot of rooms,  windows and doors

My house has four porches, a roof and carpet floors

My house has a lot of beds

Made with tender loving care

My house has a wonderful loving spouse

Does anyone know where I can find my house


Submitted: January 23, 2009

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EdwardJBradleySr

frankie43:

Well written and expressed! Interesting and surprising ending rewards the reader, if stays to the end. Gave it an "I Like It" vote. Good job.

We all have our dreams. This one is most wholesome and commendable.

Will read and vote for your other postings. At times, without commenting.

Thank you for becoming a fan.

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Fri, January 23rd, 2009 6:25pm

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thank you for commenting on my poem and the i like it vote

Sun, February 1st, 2009 8:16pm

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