The everlasting wall

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

a little poem about an invisible wall

I sit here waiting for this wall to fall

I don't know why

We are the ones who built it

So strong and so tall after all

I think this wall must come down

Or we might drown in the sorrow

That's all around

So I will start here and you can start there

We will meet in the middle somewhere

I can see a hole but I can't get tru

Without some help from you

Is there no other way you say

And I say there is no other way


Submitted: January 30, 2009

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BaileyThompson

Aw, very good poem! I think it has much deeper meaning than what you're saying. In other words, a metaphore for something else??

Fri, January 30th, 2009 4:33am

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I hope this comes out where it is supposed to. I'm still learning how to use this web site. anyway, thanks for the comment.you don't know how right you are

Thu, January 29th, 2009 8:57pm

BaileyThompson

You've figured it out, it came out where it was supposed to, just thought I'd tell you incase you were wondering.

Fri, January 30th, 2009 3:39pm

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thanks Bailey !!

Sun, February 1st, 2009 4:31pm

Brian W

Many people get a invisible wall between them that builds un-noticed until it is to late to break it down. A good poem

Mon, February 2nd, 2009 2:55am

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thanks for the comment.I agree

Sun, February 1st, 2009 8:00pm

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