Brylee & Nate (COMPLETED)

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this is a short story i wrote about my friend bethany (kurlz. she thinks that she will never find someone who she will love. it isnt a true story but i felt like writting it, and it isnt that good of a story thou.

Submitted: June 15, 2011

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this isnt a really good story but please read it and comment.

Brylee was just walking out the house when her mum stopped her. Her mum had dirty blonde hair and grey-blue eyes.
“What?” she snapped.
“Don’t get angry with me. I was going to say be home by midnight.” Her mum said and walked out. Brylee didn’t have a good relationship with her parents. Her mum didn’t want Brylee and told her often and she always caught her dad cheating on her mum with someone younger than him. He never really loved Brylee’s mum he only married her because their parents told them to. And for the money.
When Brylee got in her car she drove over too Lara’s house, she was going on a blind date and didn’t want to go alone so she set up a blind date for Brylee as well. She was one of Brylee's best friends and she promised her she would go so Brylee couldn’t say she was sick. When she got to Lara’s she beeped the horn and Lara came running out in black high heels.
She was wearing a bright pink dress with black high heels. She had her hair curly and a purse in her left hand. Brylee was wearing a blue dress with black slip-on shoes and she had a small purse. Brylee didn’t think she would like this “date” but she would give it a try.
 
When they got to the restaurant Lara bolted out of the car. Brylee got out slowly and walked in after her. They had a reservation for four. The lady led us over to a table were two boys were waiting anxiously. Brylee smiled a little bit.
“Hi, I'm Lara and this is Brylee.” Lara said.
Brylee smiled and waved like she was nervous.
“I'm Jace and this is Nate.” Jace had brown hair with warm brown eyes. He was holding a flower. Jace was Brylee's date and Nate was Lara's date.
Nate had brown hair with light blue eyes. Brylee smiled at them and shook their hands while Lara just looked at them. Brylee nudged Lara’s side and Lara looked at me confused.
Nate laughed knowingly at Brylee and Jace just looked confused.
“Shall we eat?” Brylee asked changing the subject. She wasn’t nervous but she didn’t want Lara to be.
“Sure.” Jace said moving over. Jace and Nate were facing each other and Brylee and Lara were facing each other. They all picked up the menu at the same time. Lara ordered a salad with water; Nate ordered a chicken snitchel with gravy and a coke. Jace ordered a steak and salad with water and I ordered the same as Nate.
When Brylee looked back up Lara was shaking her head, Nate was looking at Brylee with a small smile and Jace was looking at her shocked.
“What?” she asked as if she didn’t know.
“Why do you always order meat?” Lara asked.
“Why not? It’s just meat.” Brylee said. She shrugged her shoulders and Lara shook her head. Nate laughed silently and Jace was looking at her like she was crying.
Brylee shrugged her shoulders as the waiter came back with our food.
“Here you go.” She said handing us our plates.
The whole night no one talked. Lara pushed her food around the plate and Nate and Jace ate their food silently and fast. Brylee ate three bites of her snitchel and gave up. Lara was angry at Brylee for something but Brylee didn’t know what. Brylee sighed and watched Nate and Jace eat. Jace was eating faster and quicker than Nate. Nate saw Brylee watching them eat and he raised an eyebrow. Brylee shook her head and looked away.
Someone’s phone went off and they all looked for who it was. Jace shook his head so did Lara. Nate shook his head. Brylee pulled her phone out and answered it.
“Hello?” she asked.
“Bry, please come and get me its Andrew. Mum and dad just got into a fight and are throwing things.” Andrew said. Andrew is Brylee's little brother. Whenever he got in trouble Brylee would get him.
“It’s okay I'm coming.” She said before hanging up. She looked up at Lara then Jace then Nate.
“I'm sorry I have to go.” She said before getting up.
“Where are you going?” Lara asked.
“Andrew’s in trouble.” Brylee answered simply.
“Andrew?” Nate asked with a hint of jealousy.
“My brother.”
“Leave him alone, the kid needs to learn to defend himself.” Lara said crossing her arms.
“I agree.” Jace said. Brylee shook her head.
“He’s seven years old. I'm not leaving him alone especially with mum and dad.” Brylee said.
“Go, do you need a lift?” Nate asked.
Brylee shook her head. “I drove. Can you give Lara a lift home?” she asked. Nate nodded his head.
“Thanks.” Brylee yelled running out. Her brother is ten years younger than her and he was terrified of their dad and mum.
When Brylee got to her house she jumped out the door and ran up to Andrew. He was hugging his knees on his bed.
“Andrew come on. Well go get some ice cream.” Brylee said sticking out her hand. Andrew took it instantly and they ran out the house.
Brylee drove them to the closest ice-cream shop and ordered two cones. The store was called “Anytime ice-cream”.
When they got their ice-cream they sat down.
“Are you okay?” Brylee asked Andrew. He nodded and licked his ice-cream.
Brylee thought the date didn’t go as well as Lara or Brylee thought it would but at least they all got food.
 
When Nate dropped Lara of that night he wanted to push her out the car. He thought it was rude how she told Brylee to leave her brother. He was also angry at Jace.
“What’s wrong with you?” Jace asked form the passenger seat.
“Nothing.” Nate said through gritted teeth. When he dropped Jace of he drove straight home. He didn’t want to think about the date but his thoughts kept drifting off towards that one girl. She had red hair with blue eyes and she looked beautiful. He liked it how she ordered something with meat instead of a salad like Lara.
Lara had set up another date for them but Jace said he couldn’t come. Lara said that she and Brylee will go anyway. The date was for tomorrow at the fair. Nate didn’t want to go unless Brylee was going, so he had said that he will go if Brylee comes as well.
Lara looked shocked to begin with but covered it up quickly.
When Nate arrived home he went straight to his bedroom to find his sister sleeping on the bed.
“Carry, what are you doing here?” he asked his older sister.
She woke up instantly.
“What does it look like I'm doing? I'm trying to sleep.” She nearly yelled. Carry had brown hair and amber eyes.
“Go find somewhere else to sleep this is my room.” Nate growled.
“No.” she said stubbornly. Nate groaned and went to sleep in the other half of the bed. There was no winning with his sister.
 
When the fair came around Brylee had to take Andrew as well because she wouldn’t leave him alone at home. She had agreed to come to the fair with Nate and Lara, but she only went because she wanted to see Nate again. She didn’t know why she wanted to see him again but when his name was mentioned she seemed to grow happy.
Brylee still wasn’t talking to Lara because of what she said about Andrew. Andrew was on the go carts when she saw Lara and Nate. But next to Nate was someone else that reminded her of someone. She didn’t know who thou.
Nate saw Brylee first and instantly smiled. His sister looked at him funny but ignored him and went back to looking out for ‘hot’ guys.
“Oh look, there’s Brylee.” Lara said disgusted.
“Why don’t you like her? I thought you two were friends.” Nate asked angrily.
“Because she’d rather go to her little brother than hang out with me.” Lara shrugged.
“Lara, it’s her brother. She wants to protect him.” Nate stated.
Brylee still hadn’t looked over at them but when she looked back up for Andrew he was gone. She looked around and didn’t see him. But when she looked up at Nate and Lara she saw Lara push him over on the ground. Brylee’s jaw dropped and Nate helped Andrew stand up. Andrew ran away from Lara and Nate and ran to Brylee. He hugged her legs as Nate and Lara walked up to them.
“Hey Bry.” Lara said happily.
“Don’t even start Lara. I saw you push him.” Brylee said through gritted teeth.
“Is this your brother?” Nate asked smiling down at Andrew who hid his head as soon as Nate caught his eye.
Brylee nodded her head and smiled faintly. Nate bent down to Andrew level and started talking to him.
Brylee glared at Lara and she shrugged and looked down at her nails. Sometimes Brylee doesn’t know why she’s friends with Lara.
“Nate what are you doing with these people?” the mysterious person from before asked looking at Andrew and Brylee with disgust.
“There my friends Carry get over it. This is Brylee and this is her brother Andrew.” Nate said. Carry grinned.
“Yer lets go, I'm sure Brylee has something to do.” Lara said.
“I don’t know, maybe Brylee wants to come along with us?” Carry asked smiling at me.
“Do you and Andrew want to?” Nate asked.
Brylee looked at Lara and saw that she was glaring at her. She was one of the most power fullest girls at school so Brylee didn’t like to get on her bad side. Brylee could see Carry was glaring at Lara.
Brylee flinched and shook her head. Lara used to be a nice person but she wasn’t being nice at the moment.
“I'm sorry I can’t. I really would like to but, I think Andrew wanted to go home. We’ve been here for a while.” Brylee said slowly while looking down at the ground. Andrew looked up at her and was about to ask what was wrong when Lara spoke.
“Okay, see you later.” She said dragging Nate. Surprisingly Carry stayed behind. Brylee still didn’t look up from the ground as Carry stood in front of her.
“Okay what’s your deal? I can tell you like my brother but did you seriously have to let him get dragged off with her.” Carry pointed furiously at the retreating back of Lara.
“You don’t get it. I like Nate I really do. But Lara is really high up on the high school list and everything. I don’t want to get on her bad side. And when I saw that she didn’t want me to go I didn’t. When you first saw me you though I was just like her.” Brylee pointed out.
“No I thought you were using Nate for money.” Carry crossed her arms.
“So you thought I was like Lara.” Brylee said again. Brylee had no doubt in her mind that Lara only like Nate for his money.
“Yes, but you should have heard the way he was talking about you this morning. He wouldn’t be quite. And when I asked who his actual date was he said it was Lara. I knew that when I first met you that you wouldn’t be one of those girls who care about money and clothes.” Carry nearly yelled.
“I don’t care about money or clothes. But I care about my life. Last year Lara nearly got a girl killed because they didn’t agree with her. I don’t want to take the chance.” Brylee yelled the last part.
Carry looked shocked. “Okay I agree with you there, but do you agree that you want to see my brother?” Carry asked and Brylee smiled and nodded enthusiastically.
For the next week Nate and Brylee snuck out of their houses and met each other up somewhere. Brylee had started getting to know Nate and they had a lot in common. Nate really likes Brylee and he didn’t want to ruin this so he tried to give her some space.
Brylee was falling in love with him and Nate was falling in love with her. But they both wouldn’t tell each other because they think that they are going to ruin the relationship they had. Carry helped them escape and not get caught by Lara.
Lara was pretending to be Brylee’s friend the whole time but she thought Brylee didn’t know.
 
Then one day it all went wrong. Brylee was at school putting her books into her back when Lara came storming up and slapped her across the face. Brylee stumbled backwards from the impact and ran into Nate. Nate and Jace both go to Lara’s and Brylee's school but they didn’t hang out with them in case of Lara finding out. Jace didn’t know either.
“Now what did I do?” Brylee whispered.
“Don’t act like you don’t know. I can’t believe you, spreading rumours and then stealing the person I like, becoming head cheerleader, taking my friends.” She yelled.
“First off I didn’t spread any rumours, I'm not head cheerleader-I don’t even want to be a cheerleader- and I don’t want your lying backstabbing friends.” Brylee said calmly.
“So you’re saying that you didn’t steal Nate off me?” Lara said crossing her arms.
“She never stole me from you because we were never together.” Nate said from behind Brylee. She had forgotten he was there.
“You’re joking right. You’re choosing her over me. I'm way better looking than her, I have contacts to other people and you still choose her. I even have money and she doesn’t she doesn’t even have a real family. Her family doesn’t want her.” Lara scoffed.
Brylee flinched and she felt Nate stiffen.
“Yes Lara, I am because not everything is about money or contacts. And I like who Brylee is. She’s not someone acting so fake.” Nate screamed.
“Nate calm down. Please.” Brylee begged grabbing hold of his hand
“Oh that is it.” She said.
“Oh no.” Brylee murmured. “Lara I'm sorry.” Brylee said with tears in her eyes.
“You don’t know something about me Brylee. It’s horrible. That rumour about me nearly killing someone, that wasn’t me it was my…” Lara was cut off by something trying to choke her. There was nothing near her throat but everyone could tell she was choking.
“Lara, what’s going on?” Brylee said running around to her.
“I won’t tell.” Lara whispered and she instantly dropped to the ground coughing.
“What happened?” Brylee asked. Brylee was so scared that she was going to lose Lara that she had silent tears running down her cheeks. Lara picked up a piece of paper from the table and wrote two words on it without looking. She had her eyes closed but Brylee could tell she was crying.
 
Everything was going fine for the next three days until Brylee was left alone in her house. She was going out on a proper date with Nate and she was ready early. She decided to make a sandwich.
Brylee still couldn’t get over what Lara wrote on that piece of paper. She’s had dreams about the two words but nothing seems reasonable.
When Brylee heard the doorbell she ran to the door opening it with a huge grin on her face. When she saw that it wasn’t Nate she didn’t lose the grin because she knew that he would be their soon.
“Lara what are you doing here?” Brylee asked slowly.
“I'm not Lara. I'm Dana.” Dana said before pushing Brylee back so Dana could enter the house. When she entered she grabbed Brylee’s hair and pulled her into the kitchen.
MEANWHILE
Lara was stressing out. She didn’t know were Dana was and she knew that Dana was going to do something to Brylee. Instead of sitting around she decided to take action and ring Nate.
When Nate picked up he didn’t sound happy. “What?” he snapped.
“Please tell me Brylee is with you?” Lara begged.
“No I'm on my way to pick her up.” Nate said.
“Oh no. I'm on my way. Get to Brylee’s quickly.” Lara yelled while starting up her car and hanging up before Nate could respond.
When Lara got to Brylee's house she saw Nate getting out of his car.
“Hurry.” Lara urged. Nate was running behind her and instead of knocking on the door they burst in and saw Brylee tied to a chair in the kitchen. She had a massive cut on her left arm and blood running down from her temple.
“Brylee.” Lara whispered. Then she saw Dana with a knife making her way towards Brylee.
“Don’t you dare touch her Dana.” Lara yelled walking in and standing in front of Brylee. “Nate untie Brylee.” She added. Nate ran to Brylee and untied her bounds.
“Don’t get in my way Lara.” Dana screamed.
“No, I will not let you hurt anyone else. I'm sick of it. You impersonate me and then nearly kill people. But this is going too far. I didn’t even like Nate. And Brylee does. Get over it. This is going to stop now.” Lara said sternly.
“No.” Dana said before going to stab Lara. But the knife never hit Lara because Brylee stood in the way and got stabbed for her.
“Brylee?” Lara choked out.
Brylee groaned and collapsed on the floor.
“Brylee, no please you can’t leave me.” Lara whispered. She went to pull out the knife but Nate stopped her.
“Don’t, it will slow the blood from coming out.” He whispered. He had tears running down her cheeks.
“She deserved it. I hope she dies.” Dana said. That made Lara snap. Lara stood up and punched Dana in the face hard enough to knock her unconscious.
“I hope you die.” Lara screamed at the unconscious Dana. Then Lara went to the house phone and called an ambulance and police. They said they would be there in less than ten minutes.
“Please Brylee, please don’t die on me.” Nate whispered trying to stop the blood from coming out of her body.
“I am so sorry.” Lara whispered.
“This isn’t your fault.” Nate looked up at her sharply and he nodded but she didn’t believe him.
 
Three weeks later they found out Dana was sent to prison- because she was eighteen. No one knew that Lara had a twin sister. That was what she wrote on the piece of paper. Brylee studied it for ages thinking it was some joke but it obviously didn’t click in her mind when Brylee got out of the hospital after surviving getting stabbed.
Nate and Brylee are happy together. They had told each other that they loved each other and Lara was ecstatic for them. Lara was back to her old self and she quit cheerleading and left all her friends. She know hangs out with them and doesn’t think too much into things. She doesn’t go out for money or anything like that before. That wasn’t really her because Dana was controlling her life.
Carry is happy for Nate and Brylee and she even talks to Lara in a happy mood.
Nate was going to propose to Brylee when she turned nineteen. Brylee was completely in love that she thought if Nate asked her when she turns eighteen she would say yes.
Lara isn’t interested in boys anymore because of what happened and Nate and Brylee are constantly trying to set up double dates for them.
Lara would just say she was busy. Everyone was happy and everyone now knows that it wasn’t Lara trying to hurt people but it was her twin sister Dana.
Everyone was happy.


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