My favorite time of the year

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I redid my introductory paragraph, cuz mt stupid teacher said it wasn't good enough.

Submitted: December 18, 2008

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Submitted: December 18, 2008



All right here's the improved version:

The intense, sultry sun beams down, making me feel as if i'm in a conflagration.

To people it's irksome and irritating, but to me it signals my favorite time of year.

Summer is rapturing to me because i have the oppoertunity to visit me family

members, go shopping, and visit new places every time.

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