A Wind

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Commercial Fiction  |  House: Booksie Classic

*Wind*

 

Like me in the middle of Autumn
 

Running scared,
 

From the falling leaves,

To Hide

Under the mystic Oak Tree.

 


Submitted: September 22, 2013

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bobthebuilder

Interesting simile. Very cool.

Sun, September 22nd, 2013 5:46pm

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Welcome Bob :) Thanks :)

Sun, September 22nd, 2013 11:23am

Angie Blake

Wow nicely done!

Sun, September 22nd, 2013 6:06pm

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Thanks and Welcome :)

Sun, September 22nd, 2013 11:22am

quiet dreamer

i like how you make me see a wonderful image inside me head with these few words. I really like it, makes me think^^ :)

Sat, October 5th, 2013 3:36pm

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Such a kind comment *_*. You are welcomed to stop by anytime.

Sat, October 5th, 2013 11:35pm

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