Eager To Be One With You

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic


For you I would rather die and live

I would sink and rise

I would kill the world

And wait for you to blew my spirit

I am all into the One

Into you my everlasting Keeper 


Submitted: June 14, 2013

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arun

Good venture, Bella.
Keep writing.

Sun, June 16th, 2013 4:57am

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Thanks arun and welcome :)

Mon, July 15th, 2013 2:55am

Govet19

Nice One , Bella :)

Sun, June 16th, 2013 8:02pm

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Thanks Ronnie and Welcome :)

Mon, July 15th, 2013 2:51am

AlM HlGH

Wow that's some scary love; but love is scary. Great analogy of loving someone.

Tue, July 2nd, 2013 3:25pm

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Thanks and Welcome :)

Mon, July 15th, 2013 2:50am

Davinder Ranu

I believe she is talking about GOD or worldly lover...both ways very good indeed!...

Mon, July 8th, 2013 7:22am

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Oh Davinder please do not try to read me that well LOL :) Welcome :)

Mon, July 15th, 2013 2:49am

comeonskinnylove

so strong and beautiful for such a small amount of words. lovely poem ~ comeonskinnylove ?

Tue, July 16th, 2013 8:01am

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Thanks and Welcome!

Wed, July 17th, 2013 1:12pm

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