My One

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Dedicated for my cat.

I know you when you're here

When you look into me

I am scared

Because I see me in you

I love you scratching me

To wake me up

From my illusion

I love it when I touch you

When I feel your voice

I want you to be aware of me

That I am standing still

Watching in Hunger

My plate eaten by you 

 

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Submitted: April 03, 2013

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The Sheep

That is so cute. The images dance before you in your head. The scratching to wake you up and the touching of the little kittens fur. Cats do stare you down don't they.

Wed, April 3rd, 2013 12:47pm

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Cats are unique in their cutest ways

Mon, July 15th, 2013 3:01am

ashi17

Cute.... Enjoyed reading !! Welcome back with creative work :))

Wed, April 24th, 2013 10:04pm

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Thanks Ashi and Welcome :)

Mon, July 15th, 2013 2:59am

AlM HlGH

Ah don't we all... Great poem and glad to see you are writing again. Just like me... I just started back writing and hope you stop by to check it out also... Take care and looking forward to more of your work...

Sat, June 8th, 2013 11:54pm

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Yes Sure I will check when I have time :)

Mon, July 15th, 2013 2:56am

Davinder Ranu

So sweet to write about your cat Bella...Keep going!

Mon, July 8th, 2013 7:24am

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Ya My best lost friend lol :)

Mon, July 15th, 2013 2:48am

bobthebuilder

We have 2 cats, and boy do they stare us down when we are eating! Cute poem!

Tue, July 16th, 2013 12:49am

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I adore animals :D

Wed, July 17th, 2013 1:13pm

comeonskinnylove

i have two cats, one kitten and one big, fat cat. i love the photo at the end! and the poem is light-hearted and cute. lovely :) ~ comeonskinnylove ?

Tue, July 16th, 2013 8:02am

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Thanks and Welcome :)

Wed, July 17th, 2013 1:08pm

AnnieBirnie

Hi- this is so good i really like this poem it is so cute and i love it. It is really good on how instead of writing about someone you wrote about a cat :)~ anniebirnie

Sun, August 18th, 2013 5:54pm

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Welcome. And yes Cats are my thing :)

Mon, August 19th, 2013 7:55am

quiet dreamer

it's really very cute to write a poem for your cat. Is the picture beneath the poem of your cat? very cute, too :)

Sat, October 5th, 2013 3:33pm

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I love my cats more than anything :) LOL No this is from Google :D Thanks for your visit.

Sat, October 5th, 2013 11:36pm

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