THE ALICE OISEAU CHALLENGE - ILLUMINATE

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I almost jumped through the roof when alice gave me my subject: bunny. Honestly guys...I'm gonna change my name. That's the second bunny for all the challenges..eish. Just kidding.

Subject: bunny
Setting: at the ocean

Words: Locked
Jewel
Chateau
Whistle
Petals
aurora - the lights not the chick

Hopefully you can see what this poem is about. I'd love you hear your interps!! Should be interessting.

Alice, I hope I did the words justice.

Submitted: June 21, 2008

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Thunderous waves draws closer, roaring to the shore

Making sure their voices are heard in the disheartening dark

Rolling over the sand, eradicating the footsteps of those left behind.

 

The whistle of the wind, enthralling all within

The song reaching depths that no mind can comprehend

Words no one can perceive, thoughts no soul can sense.

 

Locked away beneath the sandy foundation

The remnants of lives, shards of dreams

Glistening like a prized jewel.

 

They are obscured in their private chateau

Leaving behind those who loved them the most

Wallowing in their mandatory barrenness.

 

Petals of hope drift from the Heavens

Fervent to bring rest for the somnolent souls

Guarding their comatose hearts but keeping their reminiscences.

 

As the aurora delicately illuminates the midnight sky

The tender bunny hops away into the indefinite

He will eternally remember the love they gave.

 

 

 


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