The Hallway of Unspoken Words

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Another weird poem and the first one in a while. I'd love to know what you guys think about this one

Unspoken words leap from the stone cold walls

Waiting for someone, anyone to hear their reverberation  

 

Unheard shrieks cry from the bricks

Craving for ears to hear, hearts to heed

 

Voices of the unloved, the forsaken and the departed

Fight with each other, demanding attention

 

Not a soul is taking note, they just pass by

Unaware of the plights of the lost   


Submitted: August 14, 2008

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Classy Peach

Veronika decides to die.
until a young man holds her hand.

Thu, August 14th, 2008 5:00am

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Huh?

Peach, I'm confused.......zing zing zing

Thu, August 14th, 2008 7:14pm

Classy Peach

OUTSTANDING poetry Lien.

Thu, August 14th, 2008 5:01am

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Thank you Cow. I have serious writers block so I haven't been writing much but will make up for it asap. I hope you've been keeping well.

Thu, August 14th, 2008 7:15pm

dreaming of you

wonderful poetry , very sad but very touching ,
terry

Tue, August 19th, 2008 6:40am

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Thank you terry. glad you enjoyed it

Tue, August 19th, 2008 9:51am

VictoriaDawn

i liked it....it was sad and heartfelt...in a weird sort of way, but dont get me wrong, i love weird :)

Thu, August 28th, 2008 12:38am

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I love weird 2. thank you victoria

Wed, August 27th, 2008 5:49pm

JenniferNichole

Wow, that was haunting! Loved it, I think I would run down that hall~coward like! Ahhh!
I saw a dirty hall, with dim lighting and scribbles along it in different colors, like: 'So and so loves so and so' or 'Such and such was here' type of writing. Ghosts haunting the place; as if voices of students in a hall, or a night club where people wrote on the wall....not sure, but I like'd it. ;)
~rain

Thu, September 4th, 2008 4:57pm

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You've got the right idea rain! But I couldn't find a picture that would compliment the poem.
thanx

Thu, September 11th, 2008 3:38pm

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