Bad Lil Girl

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Thrillers  |  House: Booksie Classic

Well, read the title.

running and running

going to a girls' boyfriends house

he is so wonderful sweet loving

you'd do anything to have him

knocking on his house

he opening the door very slowly

you run in his house

kissing him

shoving you off him

crying and crying

you'll never have him

you kill him

and run

 


Submitted: June 04, 2013

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Hanif Tariq Ballard

Good it could be better. A few words could be added to make it flow more smoothly.

I haven't been on the site in a while to tell you the truth. If you get the chance please read my latest short story "Such a Vicious Cycle" I would appreciate it if you gave me some type of feedback after reading.

Tue, June 4th, 2013 7:44pm

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Ok thank you

Wed, June 5th, 2013 1:32pm

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