blood walk

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Thrillers  |  House: Booksie Classic

walking to my home
without my phone
all alone
makeupdripping down my face
crying feeling so lonely

 Walking to the payphone

Calling my friends

telling them I can't handle life anymore

they take it as a oke

laughing and giggling

they hang up the phone

pulling out a pocket knife

I slit my throat

slowly and painfully


Submitted: April 25, 2013

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Shit, these are getting really dark. Like, they're amazing, but terrifying at the same time. It's awesome!

Wed, July 3rd, 2013 2:06am


Thank you.

Fri, July 5th, 2013 10:09am

Angel Sykes

Yikes, just yikes. Good style, ummmmm Whoa okay this comment isn't trying to dis you or anything. I loved the poem it was really deep and just yikes thats all I can really say cause I'm kinda speechless

Mon, December 9th, 2013 12:10am

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