Scared Straight

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Flash Fiction  |  House: Booksie Classic

If your not 13 Please don't read this.

when you look in the mirror

you see your past

with a terrfied look

on your pales little face

poor Lil Girl

mommy hitting you

saying your ugly

stabbing a needle in your mommy

hoping she will die

witha long last of pain

crying you can't forget


Submitted: June 04, 2013

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I have to say, the description made me click on the title; thankfully I am 14. This was harsh and slightly sadistic. I'm not a dark person, though my poems would beg to differ, but I read dark poetry and stories. It's vague, but I find it adds to the effect of this poem; flows well and leaves the reader wondering. *pales- pale
"Saying your ugly" *your- you're; good job :)

Wed, June 5th, 2013 5:24pm


thank you

Wed, June 5th, 2013 1:33pm

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