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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Indoctrination of our minds


Where are we headed
Where are we going
In which direciton 
Is our lifeforce flowing
No way to know
What our future will hold
Where we will be 
By the time we are old
Who is to say
What we can or can't do
What path we sould take
What we should choose
The life of a saint
Good will to all men
To never do wrong
Follow rules one through ten
The path of the devil
Always looking for more
More wealth and glory
Gluttony galore
Somehwere between
Not devil nor saint
Avoiding extremes
Playing it safe
neither is wrong
Either is right
Whichever you choose
Certain people will fight
Fight against your decision
Tell you you're wrong
Make out you have failed
Make you follow the throng
But how can they say
How do they know
They have no foreknowlege
They;re just in for the show
We're all the same
Lost in the tide
With no idea
What next we will find
Swimming in circles
looking for more
A greater meaning
A way to the shore
Someone else takes control
Gives us a map
It is hard to deny 
The appeal of the fact
But stay calm and considered
See it all as a whole
Ask relevant questions
And you'll soon see the holes
The gaps in the logic
The faults in their minds
The lack of good reason
No evidence you'll find
As oblivious as us
To the meaning of life
No idea what comes
After this strife
They make it up
Feed us their lies
Hope that we follow
And think them devine

Submitted: January 06, 2013

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Sultry Alice

What you poem is about happens way too often. People letting themselves get led like sheep following becuse they belive the leader is all knowing. Poppycock, you are right, follow your heart not some preacher.

Mon, January 7th, 2013 2:22am


Thank you very much, glad to know that my gibberish isn't completely incomprehensible!

Wed, January 30th, 2013 1:01pm

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