I'm Sorry Emily

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How bad of a friend I am

I'm sorry

Please forgive me

I lied to you

That makes me a horrible best friend

I wish you would forgive me

I promise I will never lie to you again

I thought you would be mad at me

Please for give me Emily

I'd die if you weren't my best friend

Please

Your the best to my friend

The fruit to my Loop

The peanut to my butter

The star to my burst

You mean alot to me

I am such a bad friend

I wish I can rewind and undo what I did

Please Emily

Your my mommy at school

I love you!

I'm such a horrible daughter


Submitted: January 11, 2012

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Nora Yang Hitatori

wow thats really good that almost reminds me how it is with my bestest of best friend. You turly show that you want to keep her as your friend and so that shows your not a bad person. This poem showings alot of meaning to it. This is a really good poem I like it. Great job at writing your poems.

Wed, January 11th, 2012 6:08pm

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thank you NORA YANG HITATORI

Wed, January 11th, 2012 10:10am

browneyedsoul511

Very emotional, real feelings, very simple but it goes to the point. What I love the most about your poems is that all of them are really personal, your style it's different, and I enjoy it so much! Keep up the good work :)

Wed, January 11th, 2012 8:24pm

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thank you I dont make them a certain way i make them turn out how i want them to turn out...

Thu, January 12th, 2012 7:53am

Yoshie Akira

Aw...:'( I like it! :)

Wed, January 11th, 2012 11:01pm

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thank you

Thu, January 12th, 2012 7:52am

Louise20

sounds like what i did to my friend on accident!!

Thu, January 12th, 2012 4:01pm

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stalker... jk lol

Thu, January 12th, 2012 8:08am

tubby18

good use of wordplay to make the poem entertaining

Thu, January 19th, 2012 1:32am

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Thank you

Wed, January 18th, 2012 9:24pm

Paulsleen

This is sad. I hope, Emily forgives you. we all make mistakes :(
but on the other hand, you guys have an adorable relationship :)
Haha fruit to my loop...
Could've wrote it myself because well, my best friends named Emily too and I did some bad stuff too. I don't like saying "I'm sorry, Emily." :(
Good one ^-^

Thu, January 19th, 2012 11:29am

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thank you sooo much, she did forgive me!

Thu, January 19th, 2012 10:53am

JollyGreenGir

AWW i need to get more in touch with my BFF, it's weird because we've known each other for LIKE ever and we barely talk anymore, but when we do we still see each other as BESTIES for LIFE!!!

Sun, January 29th, 2012 6:07pm

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hahaha same here

Mon, January 30th, 2012 7:22am

shika

AWWWWWWWWW!!! That was really so BEAUTIFUL!!! so much of emotions packed in these cute li'l lines!!! GREAT WORK sis. :-D

Sat, February 4th, 2012 11:47am

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Thanks :)

Sat, February 4th, 2012 11:58am

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