Don't Crib Just get up and Fight

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Another poem trying to say,dreams are worth to fight for...

FIGHT

  When life pushed me hard, I was woken from the sleep of Illusion, and felt the reality scar. Canvas of Dreams was teared away by knife of Fear, tears were shouting for help, but there was no one to Hear.

Saw a thread of Hope, and hold it tight, I knew no one is responsible for this, So i have to Fight. I will fight the fear to Extereme, because this time I am not fighting for anyone, but fighting for my Dreams.

I will fight the Uncertainity,and will fight the pain,because on the balance sheet of Loosers, there is everything to loose and nothing to Gain.

Hope is what I have, Hope is what i want, I will clinge back my spirit from the shadows of failures, which were always around me to Haunt.

Even if i am running against the wind, and swiming on the opposite direction of tide, Ego and Greed has created a world in which I will fight, because I know i am sheltered by creator, who reminds me everyday that, Sky is getting clearer and Sun is Shining Bright.

So don't loose hope, and just FIGHT,FIGHT and FIGHT..


Submitted: April 27, 2009

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Vincey Delaney

Wow, just a fire in the woods!!! So strong and powerful. Fight Fight, and Fight, like a wild forceful wind entering in. Love it, love it!! Oh, thank you for mentioning me in your home page. I thought this is such a warm, comforting gift, thanks from the bottom of my heart!!! Take care, good friend!!

Sun, April 18th, 2010 2:46pm

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You are a delightful person, I appreciate your work and admire your creativity,and I am so happy to find that you liked my work, thanks a lot :)

Tue, May 4th, 2010 5:38pm

ShieldofWolf

Okay my man looking at this poem I see one thing that bothers me. The switching from present tense to past tense in the same sentence, every other sentence, etc. I feel it would be so much stronger if you just put it all in present tense, I feel, I hold, I fight, etc... I think the idea of this poem is wonderful, you just need to word it so that it flows.

Tue, July 5th, 2011 7:13am

Jbortti

Beautiful and I'm surely agree that we have to fight for our dreams come true and this is the most important thing in our lives because once we're dead there's no dreams to follow.

Tue, December 27th, 2011 8:30pm

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This is exactly what I was trying to convey through my word :)

Tue, December 27th, 2011 7:57pm

Darklady

wow very inspiring poem, full of positive thoughts and messages !! Sometimes is so hard to pursuit your dreams, fight for what you really want and when you decide to fight against the world you realise that no one's there to help you .... Good work

Fri, February 17th, 2012 12:18pm

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Friend! Trust me, this is my story, everyday fighting with myself...For my trust, for my dreams, for hopes, for my life, for my beliefs...For everything I like or I know, I am Fighting........

Fri, February 17th, 2012 7:22am

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