Hope is all i have, hope is all i want

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Religion and Spirituality  |  House: Booksie Classic

This poetic conversation between god and man

Hope is all what i have,

Hope is all i want

I see bright clear sky, but there are no birds,ready to fly...

Tree of uncertainity has robbed the theme of freshness,on which leaves use to swing free...

Souls are moving,but spirits are lost, heart which was once filled with love, is serving as fear's host...

Air is there, but it is difficult to breathe,Vision is large,but we are unable to see, we are restless, we are dirty..

Oh mighty lord we are rotten with guilt and spoilt by greed....

We reached the moon but you were not there,climbed mountains and looked everywhere...

You made us,but we lost you.......................

God's replies:

I sent you to enjoy the miracles of land, to sing with water and sail on sand.., .

I am always with you but you always ignored me, I am meeting you everyday and still you say, "That you don't know me"..

Look up and down and everywhere around,try to understand my soul's sound,everything change....

And in your every thought you will hear me...

If today is Dull, tomorrow's Sunwill lite up the destiny's Park.....

Remember my Son, Stars shine brightest when sky is Dark....


Submitted: April 27, 2009

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tammanna

wow...beautiful poetry...
keep writing :)

Mon, April 27th, 2009 2:55pm

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Thank you :)

Wed, April 29th, 2009 11:33pm

rosanna1120

that's beautiful. I have to agree, a lot of people say gods never there. when he is there people just aren't searching. keep writing. my only advise is to put it out their more. please don't take offense but for such a great poem it has little views, try and get it out as best as you can a poem like this could touch a lot of people.

Mon, April 27th, 2009 7:40pm

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Thank you..I will keep that in mind. :)

Wed, April 29th, 2009 11:29pm

Parnab

hey gagan that's a good poem. now i have written a poem ,can u please comment on that .your comment is needed.

Fri, May 8th, 2009 8:55am

neverregret

very emotional. love that. i like how you included the bird metaphor in there, good use of figurative language...powerful, great job!

Sun, May 24th, 2009 12:32am

prateeksha

a beautiful poem. simple and nice

Sun, February 21st, 2010 8:40am

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:)

Sun, February 21st, 2010 12:45am

air

Gagan, I am so sorry it took me this long to come back to your page.
I really like this. It has melody and meaning.
It guides/calls the person to wake up, sing, feel, love and be. At least that is what I felt.
I very much enjoyed your wording of how you described humanity's feeling in the lines; 'the tree of uncertainty...' and 'Souls are moving but Spirits are lost'

In my experience we have to meet half way. Spirit doesn't force us to become whole or even be happy.
We have to choose it for ourselves.
Hope and Faith yes...always :-)

Hope you are well Gagan
~katie

Sun, March 14th, 2010 3:59am

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Hey Katie, it is always great to recieve an acknowledgement from your side. I am slowly making a progress towards the path on which you already are miles ahead.i am glad you liked it.Thanks a Lot.

Sun, March 14th, 2010 4:54pm

Vincey Delaney

This is so deep, very strong to the point!!!loved it!! it certainly is a special keepsake. An awesome ending!If you have some time, check out my Hope piece, it's brand new. thanks, take care!

Thu, April 1st, 2010 1:02pm

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Thanks for this lovely comment.

Thu, April 1st, 2010 7:46pm

Serenade Willie

This is a pure Heart-connect

Wed, July 6th, 2011 1:02pm

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thanks!

Wed, July 6th, 2011 6:30pm

BITSxOFxKINKY

without hope or dreams .. we have not a lot ... wise poem

Tue, February 7th, 2012 11:28pm

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Thanks :)

Tue, February 7th, 2012 3:45pm

Darklady

wow what an excellent work!!! Most of the time ithink i'm lost there's no hope no light only darkness ... you wrote that GOD is everywhere i reckon that GOD is only for some of us as well as hope ... Sorry here i go talking lol
In short is deep and a wonderful poem

Fri, February 17th, 2012 6:54pm

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Thanks Friend! I have this notion set in my mind that I am bad in poetry, so any type of appreciation, makes me happy :) I am glad you liked my work...

Fri, February 17th, 2012 10:58am

Randhir Kaur

Its so pure...a soothing write Gagan.

Sat, February 13th, 2016 11:28am

Randhir Kaur

Its so pure...a soothing write Gagan.

Sat, February 13th, 2016 11:29am

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