'My Demon Girl' Book Review

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Fantasy  |  House: Booksie Classic

I was asked to do a book review. Simple as that. >~

Hey there!! I was asked to do a book review on the book My Demon Girl by Zerocrane. There's currently seven chapters finished, and it's pretty interesting, so if you want to read it... Go ahead.

So... Let's begin.

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The book is overall really good so far. The plot is great, and I love the characters! I like how descriptive it is. I like how you introduce the characters, and how it plays along with their part in the story. I honestly LOVE the book so far! It's fantasy and fiction... two of my favorite genres! Anyway, I like the pace of the story. It really matches the plot. And the transition between chapters is really smooth. It picks up where it left off. Word choice is great, and each character's way of speaking really brings out the kind of person they are. 

I don't know what else to say.... for the first seven chapters... except: Good job, Zerocrane! I love it so far, keep up the good work!

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So... Zerocrane, keep up the good work! I love it!! And when you finish the book, tell me so I can do a full book review for you!


Submitted: August 12, 2017

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Zerocrane

I LOVE YOU GALAXY!! T.T seriously. Right now i have volume 1 finished but i haven't edited/revised the whole volume yet. Yes, I'm going to do massive editing/Revision of the whole volume 1(9 chapters). Sorry i haven't started writing volume 2 yet because i ran out of steam the past week(due to negative reviews from VETERAN light novel readers) anyways there were only two people who said negative things about my story but it really affected me badly. Well, actually, its the grammar/lack of vocabulary that veteran readers have pointed out. I mean, first of all i am a newbie. Second i am not a native english speaker. Its really difficult to write using such refined literary skills and i'm doing my best with what little skill i have. 2nd those people didn't like Zero's introduction on chapter 1 and honestly, me too. So i'm going to do a full revise of Zero's introduction and i might make it into a prologue.

Galaxy_Otaku this is a critical time for me. Both you and Karisu is raising me back from the dead. Yes, this past week i thought of quitting. Why? because i think i don't have what it takes to write a good story but, because of you and an another friend, i'm starting to really get motivated. I will post the "rough draft" of the last two chapters of volume 1 and maybe give me 15 days and i will finally be able to continue with volume 2.

Really thank you for motivating me!! :D

Sun, August 13th, 2017 8:10pm

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