wedding ring

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Mystery and Crime  |  House: Booksie Classic

A man who is about to ask his girlfriend to marry.but that's What he thinks.

It was just a normal day.the weather was good and Drake was happy.he was going to ask the Love of his life Hannah to marry him.he woke up feeling dizzy but this was normal for him because he was drunk very often.he got up,took a shower,got dressed,grabbed the ring and drove to Hannah's house.he walked out of his car. He noticed that the window on the second floor was open.This was odd because it was the middle of winter.

He walked up to the door and knocked,He waited for her to open it but she didn't come.he grabbed the knob expecting it to be locked but it was not.he walked in the house calling for her many times but she never gave back a reply,when he went in the living room he saw her.in a puddle of blood was Hannah in her favorite dress with a deep cut in her neck next to a bloody knife and on the table was a calendar. On February 20 it said "the day when he well find a ring in his drawer". Today was February 19. he called the police then went outside so he did not have to see the place anymore.after hours of questions he got in his car and went home.when he got home he saw something in his drawer that shocked him.........a note..that said.WHY DID YOU KILL HER.next to a bloody knife 


Submitted: February 28, 2014

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gavin crane

This is my first story so please don't hate

Fri, February 28th, 2014 12:37am

Solar Flexus

I'd suggest fixing it's grammatical errors and making it a bit longer like a short story. The good thing is that I didn't see that coming. Good job for a first story :)

Fri, February 28th, 2014 12:49am

gavin crane

I noticed some miss spelled wotds

Fri, February 28th, 2014 12:57am

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