It's Always Better in the Snow

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Love, like drunken rides in the winter, can be thrilling and refreshing, or cold and messy.

Was it my first time?
I had said no,
I'd move too fast ,
She'd say I was slow
I tried to hold back,
But my body said "go"
These vile fluids wanted out,
And I could not stop their flow
Gin and sledding never mix
But make for an exciting show

Submitted: October 16, 2009

Poetry love sex snow vomit alcohol sledding gin sleds

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Judy Felts

you want it, eh?

Sat, October 17th, 2009 7:37am

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Kinda confused by that comment, but thank you nonetheless.

Sun, October 18th, 2009 5:12am

Fairy of Light

Very nice with a cheeky hidden meaning. Very good. :)

Fri, October 23rd, 2009 12:49pm

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