Shed Tears Naught For Me, poem by GeminiX7

Shed Tears Naught For Me

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Poem by: GeminiX7

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Status: Finished | Genre: Poetry | House: Booksie Classic

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What do you do when love fades away?

Submitted: October 16, 2009

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Submitted: October 16, 2009

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Shed tears naught for me
For this love was not meant to be
Egg shells were the foundation
Desperate souls wanting salvation
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Gained what was needed and fled
Left with naught but a warm trench in my bed
Like spring flowers, grew your fear
That love everlasting was drawing near
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So with heaven's wings, you took flight
Hidden away in the depths of night
And though my heart and hands miss you so
I can do naught but let you go

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Alessandra Fireheart

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Sat, October 17th, 2009 9:13pm

That was a beautiful poem, it sounded very lonely. I loved the flow of it, kept my attention. My favorite lines were "Egg shells were the foundation, desperate souls wanting salvation." It was the type of line that I just had to read over and over again becuase I loved it so much.

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Sun, October 18th, 2009 5:00am

Thank you for the kind comments. To be honest, this poem came gushing out more or less, unlike my other poems that seemed to just flow whenever a thought popped into my head. I also like those lines the most, if only because they were great at describing the relationship between the myself and the subject of the poem.