Immortal Creation

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

It's about the wish, to create something everyone will know. To be known forever. The craving for fame. The acknowledgement one deserves.

I want to create,
to give life to something immortal.


Giving birth,
a process which can last forever,
this moment can be glorious.


Breaking the chains,
trying to go in the path I want,
not a way already paved for me.


you are right,
but nothing is impossible,
I want to go beyond the boundaries,
explore and create,
a work that lasts forever.


Am I too vain?
Am I asking for too much?


It’s not your business,
yet it is,
my creation can be revolutionary,
still, it can be ignored.


You have the power to listen,
to share, to experience it,
or to kill it.


Deadly are your powers,
as a reader,
although I don’t need your criticism,
without you I’m nothing.


I’ll unleash the demons inside,
to get you hooked to my work,
to make you a slave of my thoughts.


Darkness fills every creation,
with the balance of light
or lack of it,
I wish it does bound you to this writing,
to never forget.

The name. Geremij. For Eternity.

Submitted: October 31, 2013

© Copyright 2020 Geremij. All rights reserved.

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Not bad. :) I can identify myself with your thoughts. To be someone, to be different. To do the opposite from what you've been thought...

Thu, October 31st, 2013 9:35pm


yes exactly. we are people who should think freely not how others before us thought.

Fri, November 1st, 2013 4:59am

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