You and me, what are we?
Poem by: Geremij
You and me, what are we?
This could be love, this could be lust,
I can’t decide, I’m cleaning the dust,
that was left in my heart for being locked.
What you are to me, I just got shocked.
You might be the one, to re-open my heart,
open a dimension of infinite kind art,
the process has already begun,
I am the moon, you are my sun.
It’s not a formal request,
it is more of a jest,
to offer you a chance with me,
you and me, we could be.
We are not alike, just like red and green,
but in the future I will just wonder “what could have been”.
I just want to taste your sexy lips,
as you lower your hands from my hips,
tell me something romantic and sweet,
it will just turn up the heat,
but I really don’t mind,
I wish in your heart, it’s my name that one can find.
Geremij
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Comments
Yea, if you open my heart right now you'll find this name Geremij. Nice one, I love it. You rock with words. Keep the writing going.
Author
Reply
Thanks :) feel free to be constructive in criticism :) I want to learn as much as I want others to relate with my writing
I could relate with this one. I liked how you wrote this, pure passion :)
Author
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Thanks. I'm glad the passion and the emotions are put into my writing well :D
I like the rhymes you use here and the words you chose. my favourite line, I think, is: "I am the moon, you are my sun' :) very beautiful poem!
Author
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thanks. about the rhyme i try not always make it rhyming 'cause sometimes i feel some essence is lost just to put it in different sentence structure or word :)
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