You and me, what are we?

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After someone that broke your heart, now someone appears, and he is really pleasing, personality included, and you could see that he can heal you and make you happy, but there is no real connection with that person that could result into thing that you wish.

This could be love, this could be lust,
I can’t decide, I’m cleaning the dust,
that was left in my heart for being locked.
What you are to me, I just got shocked.

You might be the one, to re-open my heart,
open a dimension of infinite kind art,
the process has already begun,
I am the moon, you are my sun.

It’s not a formal request,
it is more of a jest,
to offer you a chance with me,
you and me, we could be.
We are not alike, just like red and green,
but in the future I will just wonder “what could have been”.

I just want to taste your sexy lips,
as you lower your hands from my hips,
tell me something romantic and sweet,
it will just turn up the heat,
but I really don’t mind,
I wish in your heart, it’s my name that one can find.

Geremij

Submitted: October 29, 2013

Poetry love romance heart interest

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39strypes

Yea, if you open my heart right now you'll find this name Geremij. Nice one, I love it. You rock with words. Keep the writing going.

Tue, October 29th, 2013 5:00pm

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Thanks :) feel free to be constructive in criticism :) I want to learn as much as I want others to relate with my writing

Tue, October 29th, 2013 12:24pm

galema

I could relate with this one. I liked how you wrote this, pure passion :)

Thu, October 31st, 2013 7:57pm

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Thanks. I'm glad the passion and the emotions are put into my writing well :D

Thu, October 31st, 2013 1:12pm

quiet dreamer

I like the rhymes you use here and the words you chose. my favourite line, I think, is: "I am the moon, you are my sun' :) very beautiful poem!

Fri, November 1st, 2013 3:31pm

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thanks. about the rhyme i try not always make it rhyming 'cause sometimes i feel some essence is lost just to put it in different sentence structure or word :)

Fri, November 1st, 2013 11:17am