You and me, what are we?

Poem by: Geremij

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love, romance, heart, interest

Summary

After someone that broke your heart, now someone appears, and he is really pleasing, personality included, and you could see that he can heal you and make you happy, but there is no real connection with that person that could result into thing that you wish.

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Submitted: October 29, 2013

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Submitted: October 29, 2013

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This could be love, this could be lust,
I can’t decide, I’m cleaning the dust,
that was left in my heart for being locked.
What you are to me, I just got shocked.

You might be the one, to re-open my heart,
open a dimension of infinite kind art,
the process has already begun,
I am the moon, you are my sun.

It’s not a formal request,
it is more of a jest,
to offer you a chance with me,
you and me, we could be.
We are not alike, just like red and green,
but in the future I will just wonder “what could have been”.

I just want to taste your sexy lips,
as you lower your hands from my hips,
tell me something romantic and sweet,
it will just turn up the heat,
but I really don’t mind,
I wish in your heart, it’s my name that one can find.

Geremij

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You and me, what are we?

You and me, what are we?

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Genre: Poetry

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Status: Finished

Genre: Poetry

Houses:

Booksie Classic

Tags

love, romance, heart, interest

Summary

After someone that broke your heart, now someone appears, and he is really pleasing, personality included, and you could see that he can heal you and make you happy, but there is no real connection with that person that could result into thing that you wish.

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Comment | 26 words

Tue, October 29th, 2013 10:00am

Yea, if you open my heart right now you'll find this name Geremij. Nice one, I love it. You rock with words. Keep the writing going.

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Comment | 23 words

Tue, October 29th, 2013 12:24pm

Thanks :) feel free to be constructive in criticism :) I want to learn as much as I want others to relate with my writing

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Thu, October 31st, 2013 12:57pm

I could relate with this one. I liked how you wrote this, pure passion :)

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Comment | 15 words

Thu, October 31st, 2013 1:12pm

Thanks. I'm glad the passion and the emotions are put into my writing well :D

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Fri, November 1st, 2013 8:31am

I like the rhymes you use here and the words you chose. my favourite line, I think, is: "I am the moon, you are my sun' :) very beautiful poem!

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Comment | 29 words

Fri, November 1st, 2013 11:17am

thanks. about the rhyme i try not always make it rhyming 'cause sometimes i feel some essence is lost just to put it in different sentence structure or word :)

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